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by Gnosismaster

schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definately have Hinata and Yugito not sure about the older women or Hanabi and give thought to the girls from the movie's/Fillers as well that could work
person sarge
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon and please add tenten,isaribi and hanabi in the harem and could you make the naruto's second girl ino...
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'd add Hinata and Anko.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLZ XD

Terminate with extreme prejudice. LOL


Hmm...nice chapter and plottwisty. Hope to see more soon, this fic is very very good.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter!
person roxnroll
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I really can't wait to see what happens next.
Rox
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For the harem, I say every listed girl except Hanabi, since she's only about ten at this point. Aside from that, I eagerly await more. And the omake was hilarious!
person camura
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hana inuzuka, kiba´s sister
tsume inuzuka, kiba´s mother
temari
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this is interesting i am guessing there will be more girls and detail involved when Naruto gets back lets see the ones that would work that i can think of right now would Hinata, Ino and Tenten i guess older women could be put in but i don't think it would work but hey thats just my opion.
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it.I think it was nice tach how you made Naruto not want to do it.That was new for me most of they want it right a now. I cant wait to see how you pring Ino in to the story.I hope she come soon.