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for Sakura's Submission

by Gnosismaster

schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome me like
person narukyu
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should have hinata join and either tenten or hanabi. Hinata has a crush on naruto so she is easy but with hanabi or tenten there they should give her some backbone do "things."
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is damned good. Let's hope it keeps going.
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooah.

o.o

Rly good stuff. Still a little short but packed.

Hmm, hope to see more.

o.o

U need to ask to become a pervert ? Z.z

In what forum and thread ?
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet, your friend has a very nice writing style...could you send me where the original story is? thank you!
person serhoth
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks to be a very interesting story, look forward to reading more.
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It reall mind me of two manga I saw on fakku.Think they were called Karakishi and Toushatei.Any way cant wait to see the next chapter.
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see the second chapter! Kudos to you for getting the story and thanks for sharing!!
person Jin
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I saw this on TFF and I'm glad to see it here. I hope this story goes on for a long time. Update soon!