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for Pain of Betrayal

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Hen
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Framed! That make for such a better mystery!
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is great and i vote that kakashi is framed, though it would be interesting to see how you write the story should kakashi be guilty of killing iruka. *laughs with mobid humor*
person xenawp532
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i say The killer is someone else,Hope the see the next chapter soon.
person tovah
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Kakashi be framed. I just love him to much to imagine that he killed Iruka.
person Lavinia
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote 2! it would be too cruelif it was Kakashi!
person Lavinia
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
but it should be someone very close to them... I'd like it if Kakashi was Irukas lover and this murderer was someone obsessed with another one of them and jealous like hell!
person airamsan
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its a frame job ok.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!! I think it should be that Kakashi is being framed, he was very drunk the night before and he could have found Iruka already dead and in grief and shock ran off and hid the vest or the killer stole one of his vests to use to frame him. Then there can be a real mystery. I love mysteries! Thanks for sharing this story. :)
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I reviewed the story through ff.net and from that, I think my vote is pretty obvious... not Kakashi. I'd rather him be dead too than kill Iruka. That's my vote... I'm a sap, what can I say. Of course, it should probably be someone Naruto knows and cares about... but there are plenty to choose from and suspence rocks.
person nm1716
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please #2. For naruto to loss both father figures. I t would be too hard. Please update soon.