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for Pain of Betrayal

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im am maddingly in love with Kakashi so I beg you to have him framed. Otherwise awesome fic. Very heartwrenching
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
However if the killer were ANYONE other than Kakashi I wouldnt mind
person Word_Slave
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell, please, please don't make Kakashi the killer... please.... I love Kakashi too much.... pathetic, but true.
Slave
person nawatia
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, I vote #2. Kakashi was Iruka's lover, and is distraught in his "unique" way. Kakashi was overly protective cause he knew someone was obsessing over Iruka. Just throwin it out there...
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm all for a psycho Kakashi!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please Have Him Be Framed. Please
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh interesting idea! Seeing how Naruto will react in Sasuke's position, sweet! And nuuuuuo let it not be Kakashi, let it be him being framed pwease? Kakashi rocks too much for that!

XXX
person jbjewel
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Kakashi being framed. Like you said to predictable and I think to much like Itachi and Sasuke. But I love your stories no matter what.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, it doesn't matter whither or not you keep Kakashi the killer, its where you go with the story that matters.


Personally, I like Kakashi as the killer. It plays off the relationship between the two teachers and adds to the tragedy of Naruto's loss. The question is why? If it is a frame job, I think it would be pretty awesome if Kakashi showed up dead too... of course, there really is no reason to target Iruka as he's a nobody ninja and the story will work better as a crime of passion.

Either way, I'm looking forward to chapter 3/4(?)! Keep up the good work. ^^
person llyoung
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Kakashi being framed.