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for Pain of Betrayal

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I REALLY WANT it to be Kakashi, but that would take away the suspense, so maybe it should be someone else...like...trying to get Naruto's attention cause he likes Naruto? Just dont make it Sasuke, lol, I'd cry.
person despairs
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I also vote #2 Kakashi being framed. Its hard for me to imagine him doing that...but then again he is one of my favorite characters so i'm biased lol. And also if it is really Kakashi then Naruto loses two of his most precious people instead of one :(
person Dynamo
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i love your work i cant wait till you continue
person inuyashalove04
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're downright evil! Killing off Iruka, that's just cruel. But, I guess there's a reason for it somewhere. Anyway, I really liked how you started your story, even if Iruka did die. I can't wait to see what happens.
person Luma
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D< Awh jeese... Not Iruka. Dx You're making me sad, but I also want to know who the hell did it so I can either cause severe bodily harm or kill them. -nods- Either one works really.

Anywho! Can't wait to see more. <3
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start....but I never would have imagined Iruka being murdered. Looking forward to more.
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH man! Such an awesome beginning. I can't wait to find out more. And I love the relationship you already have building between Sasuke and Naruto. Poor Iruka... and Naruto's reaction was so perfect... heartbreaking to be sure, but perfectly written.
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I was bawling by the end of this. Poor Naruto...oh crap. Please update this one soon, TW!!!
person nm1716
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad. I like the story and want to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.... who can the murder be?? I'm gonna take a stab in the dark and guess Izumo. Its just random enough to keep the audience guessing for the next few chapters as the murder-mystery begins!! Huzzah!



Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to chapter two!