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for The Mechanics of Desire

by UbakeNeko

schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter.
person Emily
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tell me you will write more? I begging you, it is a good idea and one you should definitly keep working on. I love poor Hinata, it's kinda sad how her feelings mix like that, but, I like it. So, keep writing.
person Tyko
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far it is very promising. Minor spelling errors (I caught two). Please continue.
person nm1716
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you are setting the story up. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Srsly! you should had continue instead of oneshot, there isn't enough team 8 fanfictions, especially threesomes!
person SpawnofMorgoth
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story seems rather good so far. I can never find many team 8 fics, and finding a good one is even harder. I'm eager to see where you go with this, and sincerely hope you keep up with it.
~SpawnofMorgoth
person mira
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oi! update this.
person DowntownWoman
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're continuing this story. I love to see how Hinata going to get through this dilemma she's in with her teammates.
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is only the 2nd threesome that I have ventured to read. I LIKE IT! Okay, maybe because both Shino and Kiba are not GAY and into each other...at least so far! Finish it! Come on, you can do it!
person Azu
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update this. Kiba/Hinata/Shino is my absolute favorite OT3. I can tell this will be a fantastic story! :D