rate_review Reviews

person winterkaguya

schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM

o.O

*nose bleeds*

wow....

*stuffed nose with tissues*

sasuke is definitely sex crazed for hinata!! hehheheheee.....awesome story!!

person JadedGothButterfly

schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM

That Was Strangely..Sweet.And Very Sexy.Well Done.

person ShouraiChan

schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM

..............
.............Can I totally marry this story? lmao, j/k. I LOVED this! Especially that line with Sasuke being the sex-crazied sex fiend, lol. Maybe if I tell someone that, he'll come after me in my sleep and I can totally trap him and ravish him! MWAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!!!

lmao, j/k, j/k. Anyway, keep up the good work! SasuHina is really good paring!!!!

person A Reviewer

schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Ok, but, don't use euphemisms like "her area" or "that special place". They are not really a turn on to the reader, and more detail should be included whenever it gets to the hot n heavy. Explain precisely *what* is "roughly going in and out" and in what location. Oh, and "beautiful", last time I checked, was not a color, it's a description.

person Jaqui

schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Hey, Sasuke Uchiha was a sex-craized maniac...Not that anyone knew that of course... And if you tell anyone...well...don't expect to wake up tomorrow...

Moving on!

LMAO!!!! I FREAKING LOVED that part!!! This story was so cute!!!! I am glad to FINALLY read a SasuHina fic! This was really, really great! *giggles* Sasuke-Ouji...*giggles again* lol! Great job!!!

person roxnroll

schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM

That was kinda hot. Will there be more?
Rox

person Sinslayer

schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM

i've never thought of hinata and sasuke being together, but this was such a sweet smut *puppy eyes* great job

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