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by Adi

schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! I love Kakashi's devious mind... XD A few missing words and errors, but nothing too noticeable. Thanks for writing!
person NeuroticNut
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Kakashi, you're such a whore.

Lovely. A loud Sasuke during sex, very nice.
person ari
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD That was brilliant. Thank you so much for sharing.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved loved loved it!

Especially since it really REALLY was for the greater good! OMG, totally worth that pic!

Seriously though, hot stuff. Sasuke was just so Sasuke with his *we're doing this and that's that, so let's just get it over with* attitude and Kakashi was so much WIN! Sneaky devil.

Lolol. I loved the last few lines *snickers at the thought of Sasuke's expression when he finds out*
MUAH!!!
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeh-heh-heh-hessss!!! Love it! ^__^ I didn't realize you had posted here, too - I need to log on to aff a bit more often. ^^;

Yaaaay KakaSasu! Hee, I'm gonna try not to repeat myself too much - but I have to say again that I really love their characterizations in this. Kakashi is just perfect and casual and Sasuke is XD so impatient and bitchy. Ah, I did forget to say before, I love this line: Kakashi thought back to when those same dark eyes had widened that exact amount as his cock was pushed through the Uchiha’s entrance. He did so enjoy surprising Sasuke.

hr hr hr, I think you've found a new OTP. :P Nah, not really, but you really captured some of what I like best about this pairing. Love it!
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe.. very entertaining. :D
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAWT!!!
person charmpit
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Sasuke gets pounded by Kakashi. Doesn't that just make your day? Everyone got what they wanted in this one--Naruto and Sasuke both got promoted and Kakashi got to tap that pale ass on the desk in his office. And I get to read about it! Everyone wins.

Nice one-shot.
person Allys
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Snicker* Adi you're evil and I love you XD!! LMAO!!!! Poor Poor Silly Sasuke *grins like an idiot* God that was fun. Sasuke's such a ho XD. *sighs happily* I've seen the picture and I completely agree XD. This was definitely for the greater good. And it was really freaking hot. I love Uchiha vex sex XD LOL. *Loves all over you*
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha kakashi so owned sasuke!!! i can just imagine how pissed sasuke is going to be once he hears about it. but if he "used" kakashi to get the promotion, would that mean he hasn't admitted that he likes him? because if he's so eager to have sex with kakashi he's gotta love him right?