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for Team Bonding Exercise

by Askerian

schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome! I love it. I especially love Juugo, now I have this image in my head of Juugo/Sasuke. Gosh..i love it.
person Emozilla
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love team hebi so much!

This was amazing i enjoyed every word of it.
person kchan
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I wish I had come up with this idea ;)

The technicalities got confusing and it was difficult to visualize exactly what was happening, but group sex is like that - if you haven't done/seen it, it's difficult to figure out what goes where. And here it was left fairly vague which personally bothered me a bit.

Yet I thought it was really hot, and what I especially loved was how the characters stayed in characters - I love, love, love that in fanfics and it's really rare so thank you for that. I like my Sasuke as uke, but at the same time it's very difficult to write him as such and stay faithful to the original character - you managed to have exactly the right setting for that. I loved the interaction between Juugo and Sasuke, I've been playing with an fic idea for those two and you're inspiring me... I liked Suigetsu interaction too... hell, I liked them all.

I'll be adding this to my recommended reading list!
person audrey
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant.
"you're such a leaf, tell yourself it's bonding!!"
PFFFT!!
person roxnroll
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I hope there will be more.
Rox
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Hottest Hebi fic ever. Loved every word of it; awesome job
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^___^ Yes! Team Hebi foursome! Ah, I loved this - Suigetsu was just great, and I looooved Juugo in this, so much. ^_^ And Karin was just perfect, bitchy and clingy and hot. Great story!
person MrsCake
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! A Hebi orgy had to be done sooner or later. SO glad it was you! Congrats on a fab and unique job! More would be cool, but it's up to you. ;-)
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Awesome....just Perfect.... haha, I'm one happy camper after this story.