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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
of course I ;ike the storry, so you bettere ubdate soon with a longer chapter:)
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this will be good. It's a bit tough with the shortness of chapters. If you want one, ask for a beta. A lot of times, people won't volunteer becasue they don't want to insult. Also, I think on the forum, or somewhere around here, you can find a list of beta's. YOu might troll there for one who likes Yaoi. Because the mistakes you make are pretty simple and easy to fix. (I hope I didn't offend.) Can't wait for more.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, bring on the lemon baby!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that´s an evil cliffie heh heh Plz update soon... I so want more
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it Im curious to see what happens next. please keep writting and update soon if possible.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really good please continu XD
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story, I hope to read more of it soon!!!!!!!!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting, so how is Sasuke going to get Naruto? Please continue soon.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooo...:((((
you left me like this? droling?...that was the interesting part, why did you have to stop?
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
you left me like this? droling?...that was the interesting part, why did you have to stop?
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!