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absolutely a wonderful story im really sad to see it end but at the same time im happy it had such a great ending i hope you keep writing i could have been around when you first started so i could have joined in on sum things but i'll keep up with all of ur work its very good and also nice jobs with all the pairings

Okay, I have to tell you something. I Have been looking for this fic FOREVER! I caught it when it first was posted like 2 or 3 chapters in, then i forgot the title and man. Whats funny is when you reviewed MY fic I clicked the name and went: OMG THERE IT IS! And i have much to read... So my Geek moment has passed and i will continue with my reading and thx for the review on 8 ways.

Ok, first of let me say that overall, you're story is awesome. Really, I mean that. Not completely accurate (the five great shinobi villages are Leaf/Konoha, Sand/Suna, Rock/Iwa, Cloud/Kumo and Mist/Kiri with Sound, Grass, Rain, Waterfall, Snow being the minor ones without a kage) but hey minor detail. Also I think you ought to be congratulated. When I started reading this story, I thought it was going to be a story about a submissive Hinata becoming the love slave of her 'Naruto-kun', you know kinda like 'Naruto Punishment'. Yet somehow you turned it into a vessel Hinata story where she becomes the leader of another village. Never in my wildest dreams did I think of that being conceivable, but hey, you pulled it off. Congrats on the great story.

One Word : Perfect.

I Laughed,I Cried,I Nearly Died.
But I Kept Reading,Hoping To Find,What Was On My Mind.
Something,Somewhere,Which Would Make Me Care.

...Oh,God.Random Poetic Influence.Sorry About That.

I Loved The Fic!Beautiful.You're An Amazing Writer...And I Read EVERY Part Even If I'm Not Into Yaoi/Yuri Stuff...Doesn't Matter,'cuz There Wasn't Any.But...I Loved It.Wholly!

I Love Hinata...Doesn't Matter What Pairing.

You Kept All Characters In Check.And i Imagine Hinata Being As Strong As You've Portrayed Her.

Also,I Enjoyed Reading About The Children.Adorable.

I Loved The Plot,The StoryLine,No LoopHoles.

Yes,A Fic About The Children Would Be Amazing...Only If YOU Want It. ^^

P.S.I'd Love To Talk To You About Your Fic!Add Me On Yukiko Hosokoawa On AIM Or chrysallis_reborn@hotmail.com

...But Only If You Want To. ^^

I'm Willing To,Also,Be Your Beta!

I Hope I'll Get To Read More Fics!With HinaPower!

Also,I'm Happy This Fic Has Ended But Sad,As Well. =(

P.P.S.I Loved The...S.E.X. *Blush*

ONLY HinaNaru's,Though - 'cuz Their's Is What I Only Read. *Blush*

This fic started out freaking awesome. But then it got gushy enough to break records... I do enjoy waff, but not as much as dark-waff, what a pity.
This is the second, maybe the third fic I've seen use that plotdevice where the _____ saves ______'s kid with a chakra _____. What's my point you ask? I dunno, originality?

You're a good writer, I think. But this fic just switched tracks and missed my stop.

Chiao

Well, now that your story is finally at it`s end, I must say I enjoyed the last chapters immensely, though I must say you seemed to be in a hurry to crush the Hyuuga`s. Not that I mind , the way you portrayed them showed them to be extremely evil and good riddance as such. I still do not understand the wish you made hikaru do. You said that the beasts had been freed, but Naruto was a Jinchuuriki, meaning that he `d die if Kyuubi left him, just as Gaara did.Although you mentioned that Shukaku had returned to Gaara, you do not deny that the Akatsuki had killed him, and that only Chiyo rescued him. Furthermore you said that Shukaku had returned, because he knew that`s where he belonged, then shouldn`t have Kyuubi returned too? Anyway I`m so sorry thatyour story has ended as it was great. I look forward to seeing other stories written by you. How about a sequel?

wow i cant, no dont want to, believe that it's over. this was such a good story. so well written. i hope we get a story of the second generation with all of their kids or something because im loving their characters too. thanxs for writing this story it was just so good to read.

So... now that the fight is over does that mean Hinata will return to Snow village and leave Naruto alone in Konoha again???

Well, your description of the battle between Hinata and Naruto was pretty intense and the battle had a worthy winner in my opinion, but there is o0ne thing. Both Hinata and Naruto are insanely strong and that Hyuuga bastard could never hope to be that strong, otherwise it`d be completly illogical. Well can`t wait for the next chapters