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Is this a suicide mission, because they are acting really strange for shinobi who go on missions all the time. Good job. Can't wait to read next installment.
Rox

Anoher great chapter. The plot and characters are developing nicely. Keep it up.

Sorry I'm late! Been one heck of a week. So Hinata got 'something'from kyuubi and her mom's past... An early birthdate for Naruto and Hinata to handle hmmm... I thought Tsunade had a technique to effect the human nervous system? You know bring down the pain just a little? A very touching ShikaTem story... and a SONGFIC?!?!? (Okay... That's a new one on me.) Over all a great bunch of new chapters to your story. And yeah Sannin means 'three legendary warriors' so Naruto, Neji, Shika, and Sasu count as four. But I can't wait for some of the awsome mission updates and that Hiashi doesn't try anything GGGGGRRRRR!!!!! "I will be happy to volenteer to kick his @$$ in your story while Naruto is away!"

Awww such a great chapter, I love Shika/Temari. I read this and said to myself "Awwww Temari has feelings!" hahaha. Now she can't call Shikamaru a crybaby anymore, she's crying just as much.


One side note, a criticism, very short, doesn't mean much, not insulting you, but if Naruto, Neji, Shikamaru and Sasuke were their generation's legendary ninja, they wouldn't be called sannin, "Legendary Sannin" means "Legendary three ninja" with "san" meaning three. So, you might want to call them the "Legendary Yonnin", Yon is a word for four. like the Yondaime is the fourth Hokage.

Well, I was a little scared Hikaru would have fox ears and a tail, making him super cute but freaking out the people who still hate Naruto. I'm glad he was delivered safely.

AWW! That was so sweet. I liked it. Can't wait to read more.
Rox

It just occurred to me this morning that I never offered my condolences about your family. I appologize for my ignorance and ask your forgiveness. I too have lost loved ones recently. Three in fact. I hope you don't take it too hard and that you can continue this story. I much look forward to seeing how it goes. Take care. If you ever need a beta then email me. I offer my services, you can take it or leave it.
Ciao
-Spartan

Hello Shourai. I am recently added to this site, as a memeber at least, and have read your story from the first chapter up to this one and would like to offer my support in your continuing of the story. I liked it a lot. If you like, you can add my e-mail if you have msn. I would like to talk to you about my own fanfic (haven't even written one yet lol =p gonna try though. I myself am a huge Naru-Hina shipper. Have been since I watched the series. But yea. Add me if ya like. GOOD JOB!!! on the story. keep it up. and don't let jerks who can't understand the nature of the flu get to you. they probably spend too much time *ahem!* nvm that last bit lol. ciao.

-Spartan

Just reviewing again as a friendly gesture to roxnroll and GhostwriterMO I read the reviews you've both left and you two seem like people I'd like to talk to so hello to you =P=)

-Spartan

Great job. I can't wait to read more. I'm glad that you're feeling better.
Rox