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I really think Kushina should have appeared with Minato and Shioriko so she could say she didn't mind Shioriko sharing Minato with her. I get the feeling that Kushina was a woman much like Naruto, with a big heart who would have been Shioriko's best friend.

You know, I liked your SasuSaku chapter, I wouldn't mind at ALL getting one of those every once in a while, but I agree, I think you should do chapters for the other pairings too if you feel up to it, especially ShikaTema and NejiTenten

That was a nice emotional chapter. I can't wait to read the confrontation.
Rox

great job. I love the side story in the previous chapter and can't wait to read more.
Rox

Another great story, I loved it. It reminded me alot when mom told me she was pregnant with my brother. After I shook off my daze (and picked myself off the ground) mom started doing alot of things I never saw her do. Heck I did alot things I never done to help with the pregnancy; run out for take out late at night, search all of town for salt-vinegar potato chips, get myself stuck in a babybed while assembling it (it was one of those cloapseable models). ANYWAY, I just can't wait to for the next chapter, Hiashi had better mind his p's and q's or else he might be missing a p! You know what I mean?

Besides the insane OOC, it is quite an enjoyable story. Sometimes you seem to rush, but that happens. :P I find it amusing that everyone is hooking up with one another. I wonder who will get pregnant next? Temari? My favorite Naruto-babe. ^_~

Great job.
Rox

I learned an important lesson in my writing classes; your enemnies will often surprise you, but so will your friends. Or in other words, you get can get good reviews and bad reviews anytime. And when it comes from a good story I try to leave my best intentions for the writer. Your story is among my favorites, 1. it's Naruto/Hinata (a big must in my book!) 2. it doesn't bore anyone in the bedroom flare (yeah I'm a perv aren't we all?) 3. you keep the characters in good style (very low OC) and 4. you keep the reader wanting more(Darn you!) Now thank you for keeping the kitten in the story (it fits Hinata don't you think?) and Naruto loves animals anyway (lets hope Hoi-chan don't mistake anything that's apart of Naruto for a scratching post)(Ouch I think I hurt myself with that one) and Hiashi's days are officaly numbered! Not only Naruto, Neji and Sasuke but Shino, Kiba, and alot of pist off ninja girls.

finally represent the pairing that is NARUHINA , at first i was confused you had me for a minute dude KEEP GOING !!!!!!!

Beautiful story, I have to say I've really grown a liking to it. Please keep writting!