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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (eyes glowing red) THAT'S IT!!! I DON'T CARE IF HE IS THE HEAD OF THE HYUUGA FAMILY HE HAS GONE TO FAR THIS TIME!!!! NARUTO MY MAN IT IS TIME TO START SWINGING YOUR TAILS CAUSE THERE SOME THAT IS TIRED OF BREATHING!!!!
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(review was interrupted) Ahem.... NO MAN AND I DO MEAN LITERALLY A MAN WOULD ATTACK A PREGNANT WOMAN ESPECIALLY HIS OWN DAUGHTER!!!! "When Naruto finds out, heaven, hell, purgatory, and all of earth won't stop him from getting his revenge!!! Kyuubi is going to look like a freaking butterfly after Naruto loses his cool!!! (Great story as usual I knew it wasn't going to be that easy so please keep up the great work. Ps keep the kitten)
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapters, even though slight dissapointment, that it was Kibahina in the first place, but could you make a chapter about Hinata dominating Naruto, after all, she's pregnant. xD
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I can't wait to see what they have in store for Hiashi.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good to have you back. First my suggestion is take some Wal-born tablets (they dissolve in water and taste like orange juice)cause they work really good, have some chicken noodle soup, and get plenty of rest. Oh and go easy on writing it gives some writers headaches. Now second is DAMN!!! Hinata CAN KICK ASS!!! she took that idiot down like a picture! Keep up the great work but please get better also okay?
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice little story in a story. I like that you've included more development into the other characters. Will you be doing this with all of the couples. That would be cool even though it is a Hinata/Naruto fic. Good job.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy here we go again! Looks like theres gonna be some trouble before this ends. COOOL!!! Just don't forget the good stuff among the action. Oh and was it Kill Bill that the scene reminded Naruto?
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good so far(chp 1) but it reads like a first draft
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. The story is starting to get serious now. I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to read more.
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