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O_O wow sadistic much Naruto?

I had guessed that Ino had used her jutsu based off of her unconsciousness, but even with that to work on, I did not see that coming. Should be interesting to see the shenanigans that arise based off of Ten-tens impersonation... just hope one of them doesn't check with a byakugan and see through the henge :-)

"AHEM..." referee clears throat, "Ladys and Gentlement in this corner we have the mightiest bloodline in Kohona: THE HYUUGAS, lead by Hiashi and Neji Hyuuga." crowd roars of approval. "And in this corner we have the amazing TEAM SEVEN; the hyperactive loud mouth Naruto Uzumaki, the master of the Sharingan Eye Sasuke Uchiha, and the beautifuly deadly or is deadly beautiful Sakara Haruno." Ring side announcer, "And here we have it ladys and gentlemen the battle we have all known to come. Will Naruto win the most importent fight of his life? Will Hiashi get his head shoved up his @## by tailed Naruto? Will Neji sleep on the couch from an angry Ten Ten? These questions and more in the next awesome, beautifuly written chapter of our story." Keep up the great work!!!

awesome story so far im lovin it great writing style keeping me enthralled

hehehe...i can already tell the next chapter's going to be awesome, shourai-chan! please hurry!

Really good. This story keeps getting better.
Rox

Way to put Neji down Tenten kick his ass and Naruto better give Hiashi the thousand years of pain*10 edition ;)

Hinata should get Pregnant soon i think (Naruto has super seed in my opion ;) ) i like how still kept Naruto being the aggressor as well i also think Naruto should hand Hiashi his ass with thousand years of pain but i will leave that to how you Characterize him

That was good. Can't wait to read more.
Rox

"They both moaned as they felt their first and final orgasm together" Does this mean they won't be together? Or does "final" simply refer to them being done for the evening? Because, no offense, if this is going to have a sad ending, I'd rather just stop right now. I'm rather looking forward to things working out for the young couple, followed by some more somewhat-plot-driven smut.