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I`ve needed about one and a half dayys to read your entire story so far, and I ust say, that I haven`t seen a story like it for a long time with all its different and surprising quirks in the story. The story is written really well, even though there are some mistakes and grammatical errors, but overall it is still more than bearable. I still don`t know how to feel about you making Hina even stronger than Naruto, and then shoiwing her as a submissive mosochist, ah well.... What I do not understand is the fact that Hikaru is able to make an ice jutsu, or Hinata, because ice jutsus in the Narutoverse would be a kekkai genkai, just like the Hyuuga Byakugan, or the Uchiha Sharingan. I am very interested in the outcome of the fight between Naru/Hina and I hope they kick hinata`s brother`s ass ASAP. he seems to be a bastard. What I also do not understand is the fact that neither Hinata nor Naruto have been shown conversing with the beasts inside of them, because your story revolves around the reawakening of their child, as far as I understand the current story, wouldn`t it also be logical to ask Kyuubi and Byakko directly about the thing concerning the current situation? Anyway keep up your work and Update this amazing story ASAP please

I don't like the fact that Kyuubi came out to play, when Hinata seals it off it will make Naruto drop like a rock since he'll suddenly be running on near empty. It's a lousy way to win!

Naruto, in perfect cool-guy postureing.

OMG OMG INCEST!!!!!!!!! INTERESTING AND THE PLOT THICKENS. WHAT WOULD BE THAT THING THAT HIASHI HAD IN HIS ROOM?
I THINK PERSONALLY IT COULD BE A COLLAR FOUND THAT COULD SUPPRESS HINATA AND BYAKKO'S POWER. CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER

It's good to see you posting again. Although these last two chapters were, well, not as good as previous ones, it is still nice to have it continue. Welcome Back.

Hanzori is sick, I hope Naruto and Hinata rip him apart!

Please no incest. But yea, two great chapters and updated really quickly.

Great chapter. Yay for your return.

KILL THE BASTARD!!! RIP HIM APART!!! HOW THE HELL COULD HINATA LET HIM WALK OUT OF HER OFFICE KNOWING WHAT HE HAS PLANNED????????

I love the story so far, and the fact that the story is getting really good. The way you describe things in the story is really good. I hope you update soon, because I love your story a lot.