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So, the question is did Naruto climb out of his room to go rescue his friends or was he forced out? And will Hinata stay captain after everyone recovers from the mission? I really hope Naruto will be well enough to fight by Hinata's side, I'd love to see Byakko Hinata working with Kyuubi Naruto! Plus, I can see them nuzzling one another on all fours like animals.

Silly me, I mixed up Gobi and Byakko. But beating on Hinata like that... it's just asking for a Kyuubi Naruto to sense his mate in trouble and break out of the hospital to finish what Kyuubi started. NOT A GOOD IDEA!!! Why do people always have to beat up Hinata to bring out her inner power, why can't she just meditate to find it?

Really nice little story with the emphasis on Hinata. Can't wait to read more.
Rox

You should edit the lines where you refer to Hinata's mother as Hokage. Hokage is the title of the Kage in Konohagakure. The five great villages all have their own Kage's with a prefix of their country or village. Konoha is in the Fire Country, and Ho is Fire. Kazekage is the leader in Suna, in the Wind Country, and Kaze means Wind. So on and so forth.

Also, Jiraiya and Tsunade were a bit OOC, eh?

Also, where in the hell did you get the idea for Hinata being the strongest Ninja throughout Konoha? Not that it's a bad idea, just curious as to where and how it came to you.

Other than that, the chapter was fun to read, kind of. A bit boring, compared to some of the other chapter. Overall, though, good chapter.

Umm, I've been reading your fic since the beginning and I must say that it is the best I've ever read and I've been reading fics for around 2 yrs. Sorry I've never reviewed your fic I know how much u love it :)but I just never got around to it. I love the way you develop the characters and how you twist the plot that makes all the chapters cliffies lol. I love you sho-chan, sorry but i just had to say it. I can't wait for the Hinata kicking ass at yukigakure. O yea and i love the smut. Your descriptions of the smut are so good it's like I'm the one fucking Hinata or whoever is getting fucked, lol I know that was just wrong but i need to voice my opinion. Your story has inspireed me to make a WAFF fic and thanks for indirectly helping me ;).

Yours Truly,
ANBUKiller or bennyx (however it appears on the screen lol)

p.s. A small note, when u said that Hinata's mom was "Hokage" of yukigakure... Hokage refers to the leader of the land of fire. Since she's from the land of snow wouldn't Hinata's mom be the "Yukikage"??? Sorry just had to point it out. Happy writing and I hope to enjoy your next update!!!!

Thanx for the fast update. I can't wait to see what happens in yukigakure. And the whole Naruto disappearance thing , I wasn't expecting that; makes a sense of mystery. Well as you love to give these out I thought I'd give one out for a change: *e-huggle* *e-huggle* *e-huggle*. Well I don't wanna push ya but update soon lol. And once again gratz on the awesome fic

Where's Naruto?????? I can't wait to read the mission and find out where Naruto went.
Rox

Hey just read the last chap so far. I gotta say Hinata is from Yukigakure and her white Tiger is Byako then... So the only thing I can think of is she goes to her home village and set her friends free from their fantasies... Who is strong enough to damn near kill Naruto and Kyuubi.... That is the question I need the answer to.. And who is the old man who hurt Atchi like that.... Since they couldn't get anything personal from Naruto they couldn't subdue him into sleeping or living out his fantasy life.... Love your story Sho-chan please keep up the great work..

Gobi is protecting Hinata?????? Sweet, I almost feel sorry for the bitches when they get in her way!!!!

Hells bells lol. Naruto beaten? Dear Kami... Who could take on naruto at all, let alone the kyuubi. And thank you for the e-huggles *e-huggle for you*. no worries about my little rant on FantasyFreak. You should see what I would've done physically. *maniacal grin* heh. anyways. I like how this is turning out. I'm pretty much hooked on your work Sho-chan =) I've also noticed that you called yourself that at the end of this chappy *grins* Hope you like it. I just kinda thought it'd be more what a friend would call you. So sometime we really need to talk about a fic of my own. I'm having some real problems trying to come up with an idea for this fic I want to write. My basis thus far consists of merely a loving relationship between naruto and hinata. I only hope I can rival or at least try to keep up with this ridiculously delicious meal of a story. But just like a meal, I'm a pretty big guy and my appetite for food is nothing compared to my appetite for reading so I always want more *smiles warmly* and this is without doubt the tastiest storyline, and story I've read in a long time. You still haven't told us how you've been Sho *puffs out chest indignantly and turns head to the side peeking out of one eye slightly* I just qualified for black-belt exams in ninjitsu next month so I'm all psyched for a wicked awesome fight chappy *bows* Please Sho-chan? *bows lower* Hope all is going well for you and I hope that the sun shines on your face and the moon illuminates your nights. Hope to hear from you soon sho =) Please take care. Ciao my friend.

-Spartan

P.S. Just a little sidenote for FantasyFreak, whom I hope has been juvenile enough to come back and read the reviews of the devoted readers of our beloved author. FUCK YOU.

*thought I'd throw that in there for fun lol*