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Why do you call Uchiha Madara Meidara? Anywho, I like the story you've writ so far. It's enjoyable, and semi-well thought out.

Hiashi Hyuuga.... Of course. How could I be so stupid? Of course it was him! We were all so naive to think that was all there was to him! *drops her head on her desk* And of course, I was so worried about my boys, I didn't think about what could be happening with the girls! I hope Hikaru is all right... but I wouldn't put it past Hiashi to hurt a defenseless baby. And poor Sakura, all alone while pregnant, while her love fantasizes about another girl.... guy... erm...

Haha thank you for the e-puppy, its funny ‘cause I was about to tell you in my last review that you’re a sweetheart for responding to and indulging your reviewers like you do. As always, I look forward to more. You’d think I’d be able to figure it out, but I cant for the life of me figure out who the other ninja is. Stronger than Naruto… if he wasn’t already there I’d say Sasuke usually but…. Hm… Hinata maybe…. Argh I’m not sure! I guess I’ll just have to wait for more of your amazing writing. ☺

You've definately succeeded in confusing me. That's not a bad thing though. It's just making things very interesting. Now I'm curious what the plan is. I can't wait to read more. By the way, didn't Sasuke say that that girl that was visiting Konoha ( the one he had sex with) with her sister reminded him of Naruto? Could his fantasy have been her? Can't wait to read more.
Rox

Okay, I like Atchi and I can see Hinata welcoming her like a sister if she proves her worth in helping Naruto escape and return to Konoha, but the other sisters are bitches.

thanks for that! i've been having a shit day with my idiot sibling that i call my sister, and that put a huge smile on face!!! arigato gozaimasu!

i think the thing i love most about this story is that it started off as complete and utter hentai, but it has blossomed into quite the literary work! kudos!

Ah. Although you have two or three chapters still to read I do so believe that I'm going to review each of them as I read them as opposed to my norm of reading all there is and then reviewing. From what I can tell Shikamaru is trapped in a very powerful genjutsu cast upon him by that "richu" I believe? Because she was the one who wanted smokes from him. I'm glad you're alright Shourai-chan. I miss not being able to write as much but I am currently forming a plotline in my mind on a Naru-Hina fic of my own. Sometime I'd like to run it by you one-on-one to see what you think because I hold your opinion in high regard being as you currently hold my favored author position. (a hard thing to get mind you because I read a lot lol) So whenever things become convenient for you I'll give you my myspace or something. Whatever you prefer. I'll be reviewing again here in a few minutes after I read the next chappy =P Thank you very much for the updates and for mentioning me again *prideful smirk* lol

-Spartan

heh. I think I might've figured it out at least to some degree, but I was sure you'd have this. I like it when no matter what, you can't figure out everything because not everything has been left for you to figure out. You're really good Shourai. I'll be reading until I can't read no more! *quotes a knock-off of choji* I won't leave to much on this review as I'm far too eager to get to the next chapter heh. I'll be reviewing again in a few moments *begins to read*

-Spartan

Alright. Here I am thirty seconds after my last review and after reading the authors note. I went from ecstatic over the updates and the developing storyline to homocidal maniac in one blow. FantasyFreak, I hope you burn in hell. Stupid fuck, did you not read the authors notes nor the rating on the story before you read it? Something is seriously wrong with people who can review on a story based on the fact that they didn't like reading it. Dumbass fucking cunt. You were last in line when they handed out the brains weren't you you miserable piece of shit? Anyone else who is stupid enough to do anything of this sort, you're in the same boat as fantasyfreak and the same goes for you. If you've got a problem with it, tell me about it and I'll be more than happy to rid you of your less than worthless life.

Shourai-chan, I am so sorry that an author as good as yourself (I'm speaking from experience because I know what the fuck I'm talking about from reading nearly all my life) has to deal with such scum. Pay them no nevermind. They aren't even worth the brainspace it would take to remember who they are for half a second. 99.99% of your readers like what you write and the ones that don't have no grounds upon which to stand their rediculous little opinions because just like FantasyFreak, they didn't read the warnings or the rating or don't know how to appreciate someone who can come up with their own unique storyline like you have. I know how hard it is, I'm trying to do it myself and it's nearly enough to drive me insane and I scored in the top 2% of our nation on the A.S.V.A.B. I'm no retard and it is still giving me a ton of trouble. I have respect for any author who can earn my respect which you did in two chapters. So as I said, pay these trifle fools no heed. They don't deserve it nor can they come up with a valid argument that I can't strike down myself to prove them wrong "AGAIN". Should any of the idiots I've WILLINGLY and with much glee insulted wish to try to prove me wrong, I invite the challenge which, much like their intellect, is nearly, if not completely, nonexistant.

Thank you for your updates my beloved author and friend. Sorry for ranting and raving all over YOUR review space but I felt like telling off a few morons and upholding the good name of my favorite author. Sorry for the language too. I'm trying to stop it for the benefit of myself, my fiance, and of course, my dear friends. I do find that it helps to alleviate the pain in my mind brought about by incompetents who have no reasoning or grounds on which to place their vague and meaningless statements.

I'll go on and read the next and final chapter updated thus far now=) I shall review momentarily =) take care Sho-chan (may I call you that?)

-Spartan