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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't get a e-huggle? *pouts* I noticed it too... Ten-chan (neji's pet name for tenten) "Ri"chu taking care of shika whose girl is tema"ri" and "ku"chi with sasuke when the girl he just got pregnant is sa"ku"ra. I think I left a comment about it but anyways lol. I haven't read this final chapter today yet. I will do so now =P sorry again about FantasyFreak. May his guts fill the bowels of the death-eaters. *morbid statement* lol reading now. *eyes glued to screen*
-Spartan
-Spartan
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! I was right, it was a genjutsu. Nice touch with the owning or possessing personal property of the yonnin in order to put them under the influence of the jutsu. I'm afraid I can't review this one for long because as luck would have it, I have forgotten to turn the heat on in my basement where my lair resides and I can't feel my fingers. I'm sorry for the short review I'll have to leave this time but I promise that I will leave a better one in the morning when I finish my training. I really really like how this is turning out and I off you any assistance I can if you should need it in continuing the story because I am far too enthralled to let it end. I gotta get outta here now and stretch and whatnot before I go to sleep so I bid you a goodnight my friend. *e-huggle for you* God bless and take care of yourself Sho-chan. Ciao, Goodnight.
-Spartan
-Spartan
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, so I thought I almost had it figured out, then you pull the Naruko chapter on me! NYARGH! Now I'm completely lost. Totally. it seemed like they were all getting their happy life they wanted in these genjutsus or whatever they're in, except Sasuke, unless... its Sasuke's subconscious saying he's afraid of commitment, being with Sakura and having a baby. .........
I guess no e-puppy for me. *sad*
I guess no e-puppy for me. *sad*
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised Sasuke isn't used to Naruto's Sexy no Jutsu form, I can't believe it didn't set off warning bells in his head. I hope Naruto doesn't fall for any tricks, Kyuubi should give him some resistance so he can break free and rescue his friends.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... Its such a great read... But your jumping the gun with the baby eating regular food for a 2mth. old.. I am seeing that All of the guys are seeing the future in a way but why are they getting headaches.... Neji seems like everything is fine but afew things.... Shikamaru should ask Temari about his earring... And he should know something is wrong when she doesn't smoke.... HOPE to read more from you soon
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now you've got me stumped. I'm trying to figure out what happened. I can't wait to find out what those girls did to our favorite boys. Good job. Can't wait to read more.
Rox
Rox
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, here's my guess at where this is going (again...). Each of the Yonnin were drugged (duh). The drugs make them realize their true fantasies and make them come to "life" so to speak. Um, probably no right, but it's worth a shot of uncovering this madness that is so freaking awesome!!!
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. I'm sorry about FantasyFreak, don't let it get to you, you'll always get people like that who just like to be asses. Just ignore them. As you see, you have PLENTY of devoted fans who love your pairings, writing, and SMUT, ones who are wondering what they will do when you're done with this fanfic (all I can say is I hope that doesn't happen for a VERY long time) and we hope you'll continue writing!
One thing I love about these girl sluts you've added to the storry (GRRRR I hate them!) is how each one has part of each of the girls names, like Tenchi or Kuchi or Richi. Its a nice touch.
One thing I love about these girl sluts you've added to the storry (GRRRR I hate them!) is how each one has part of each of the girls names, like Tenchi or Kuchi or Richi. Its a nice touch.
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those were really good. I really enjoyed this last chapter. I'm sure those girls have screwed with something and I can't wait to find out.
Rox
Rox
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Methinks the girls should sense something is wrong and come to rescue their men from these hussies ASAP!!!!!!