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This isa good story with lots of potential...have you abandoned it? T_T

Hahaha! Jiraiya is in for it now. Looking forward to the next chap! :-)

funny story hope to see more

I love this! I don't really know what else to say except I can't wait for the next update! Oh and some KakaSaku would be splendid! Hugs & Kisses!

Sooo...I read the summary for this fic and became really interested. I got about a chapter and a half through and decided I needed to leave a review.

Your writing style really shows promise. But stuff like spelling and grammar mistakes (or massive typos, either one) are really holding this back from being a great fic! If you can, try writing in MS Word and using the spellcheck and grammarcheck. If for some reason you can't get ahold of it (or a similar program) get a beta who's good with those kind of corrections. In either case, get a beta as well just for a bit of polish.

I really hope you won't take this the wrong way. If I thought this fic was just bad through and through, I would've laughed and moved on. I'm giving you some concrit because I think it's worth the time. :)

Bwhahahahhahahaaha LMAO!

Jiraiya is so dead. ^^

I couldn't stop reading, You definitely grabbed my attention and made me want to read more! I think your really good at writing fanfics and I hope you keep making them. You mentioned that if someone made a pairing request you might consider doing it? I am such a Kiba fan, I know he isn't really a main character but he is very, very, attractive. I read other fictions where his sense of smell got him into trouble and WOW that was hot! There really isn't enough Kiba goodness here in my opinion. Thank you for taking it into consideration.
I LOVE YOUR WORK!!

I feel so bad for Jiraiya right now, But I also laugh at his misfortune hahaha

Great story, but there are several spelling errors. Maybe you should get a beta?

please pair sakura to naruto i dont like sasuke to be the one paired up with sakura update soon