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by drivven

schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Great flow, and some fun and love - perfect! I hope you already started on the sequel!!! Wonder how they'll turn out, and how will the unsuspecting friends react to their love! I like the end too, more would be a bit much, but you promised to include it later into the story, so I'm just looking forward to the continuation!

Kiba was hilarious, and I want him with Neji!

Thanks!
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Great flow, fun and love! - perfect! Love the pair and the promised-to-be-pair, and looking forward to seeing the unsuspecting friends' reaction to their relationship!!! I hope you already started the sequel! I liked the action too, more would've been a bit much, but I wanna see them do more later!!!

Thanks!
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was perfect and sweet. I agree that if they had gone all the way it wouldn't have felt right at all. Love it. ^.^
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story beyond words, it was amazing, i was wondering if you would do the pleasure of writing another naru/shika story, or maybe even try a shino/naruto story... please take this into consideration, i love you writing and im sure many others do as well
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
make a sequel add more chaps... doesn't matter as long as u add more to this story. & u know what this is the 1st time I'm reading a shika/naru. so thanks 4 writing an awesome story that might make me read a few more of them.
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I think that starting with a lime was the perfect approach and I really enjoyed the dynamics between Naruto and Shikamaru! Thank you! I hope you continue to update this story!
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah Shika as the alpha male ... nice
person shadowphoenix143
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome, not enough people put these two together even though it's such a good pairing. You really do them justice though and I am glad you are not having them move too fast.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha go Iruka! Show Ino and Sakura how to dress a boy up all nice and pretty ^__^
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww i eagerly look foward towards reading a sequel. this was just too sweet! thanks for sharing!