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for From the Abstract to the Practical

by drivven

schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adored this story, please please please write a sequel or more... hell I love this pairing so much it's probably my favorite and so rare that I was insanely pleased that you wrote it at all but I'm begging for more. I want to see how they deal with their evolving relationship and how they deal with the inevitable discovery by their friends and fellow nin.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I am a little disapoteted that the story is most likely ending without a full lemon, but I am content and happy with this ending. Now don't get me wrong, I want you to contoule this story, or maybe jsut a sequel...I think I like the ideal of the sequel better. *Kicking myself in the butt for saying that* But its true. I don't think theres much more you can do with this story, by just contouling it. This part of the plot has run its coures and has reched its end. Thats the way I see it anyways...So ya my vote is the for a sequel! But make sure it has the "their frist time" lemon in it. Thanks for the great read. This story is being faved in my bookmarks! ^___^

*Side Note* I gald to hear your still working on Messinges and Harts. I am so looking forward to that lemon. Let me know when you updete is ok? ^___^
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....I soo love you right now! LOL. Honestly, I'm happy that they didn't go all the way for their first time. It sets a nice and realistic pace to the story. And...okay, so this is really corney but my birthday was the second of Jan and I would absolutly love it if you could write a NejiKiba fic sometime in the future. I'm working on one right now; but between my two kids and work, I can't get anytime to write! Thanx for providing a much needed disraction from my stressful daily life.
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so sweet! i adore ShikaNaru! looking foward to the next update.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was a quick update. O.O or maybe I just have good timeing. *shrug* Anways, great chappter. I love it so far. Can't wait for the next update....and with Harts and Messions, well I will be wating on pins and nittels for that all awated Lemaon chappter...*smirk* no presher, no pershier at all. *evil laugh* ....j/k But realy I love your work. I will be keeping a close eye on your page for the updates. Great work.
person despairs
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm happy to see somebody wrote a good ShikaNaru story. There isnt nearly enough around. Although my ultimate favorite couple will always be SasuNaru...i can appreciate Naruto being with Shikamaru. They are good together.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wow! Out of all of the chapters so far, this one would have to be the most entertaining! Poor Neji...Or should I say poor Kiba? Is there going to be some NejixKiba? Please, oh please, oh please....
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I love it. I was rolling in the floor. Please, please, please up date right aways. I have to see what happen next. Please?!?!?!
person kaimono
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa, wasn't expecting the sudden twist into action. the whole alpha and cannot use their ninja skills made it interesting. do continue updating =D
person animelover
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this was just the BOMB!!! i absolutely loved the thugs and misunderstandings chapter. where did you come up with that? brilliant! i'm not much of a shikanaru fan, but this fic hit the spot. ;-) i'll watch for the update ...

ciao for now!