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January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
And wow. This was the first story in here that made sense from beginning to end, and kept me captivated enough to be on the edge of my seat for every page. Congratulations on this story and thank you for writing it.
It is a pity what happened to the girls, Naruto and Sasuke.
I noticed a few mistakes, some exaggerations, a few kunais to grammar but noticed too bad.
There are parts that are a bit vague so it's difficult to understand what is happening, specially at the fight scenes.
The ramen guy, you called him Ichimaru, was it a mistake or an original character?
I assumed you meant Teuchi from Ramen Ichiraku.
I hope you haven't planned a sequel for this, sometimes stories must simply stay done. Kinda like Matrix, you know, it should have stayed on the first movie.
In any case, I don't have much more to say other than Congratulations again.
Hugs,
Poluskinha
And wow. This was the first story in here that made sense from beginning to end, and kept me captivated enough to be on the edge of my seat for every page. Congratulations on this story and thank you for writing it.
It is a pity what happened to the girls, Naruto and Sasuke.
I noticed a few mistakes, some exaggerations, a few kunais to grammar but noticed too bad.
There are parts that are a bit vague so it's difficult to understand what is happening, specially at the fight scenes.
The ramen guy, you called him Ichimaru, was it a mistake or an original character?
I assumed you meant Teuchi from Ramen Ichiraku.
I hope you haven't planned a sequel for this, sometimes stories must simply stay done. Kinda like Matrix, you know, it should have stayed on the first movie.
In any case, I don't have much more to say other than Congratulations again.
Hugs,
Poluskinha
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i definitely love the story!!!!!!!!!! ^^,
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absoloutly loved this story!!!! Thank you so much for creating such a wonderful piece of art!!!! I will read your other naruto fic asap!!!! See you!!!!
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All in all a great story ^_^
(Oh Haha.. my ReCAPTCHA words were SHAFTED and GRATEFULLY)
(Oh Haha.. my ReCAPTCHA words were SHAFTED and GRATEFULLY)
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's sad that Aito and Hikime died. I really liked them. But I'm glad Orochimaru died. He's way too evil to be left alive. I love Itachi but I can't believe what he did to Naruto. I'm glad Sasuke was able to bring Naruto back to his normal self. The ending was great. It was so funny. Great job. Definitely one of my favorite stories.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I wasn't expecting Itachi to show up at the end. This story just keeps getting better and better. I love the relationship between Naruto and Aito. I thought it was adorable when she called him "Da". I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the amazing work.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That last line was a (do Z)! "Uchiha Itatchi." Where did that come from? I bet Naruto is saying the same thing huh?:) I have been enjoying your story very much:) Looking forward to more.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome, I can't believe I just sat here and read all 13 chapters. lol I couldn't look away apparently. loving ya fic, itachi showing up ahh...the plot thickens. hope to read more.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the fast update..... I can’t wait to see what part Itachi is to play in this story..
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!! Didn't see that coming!