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by TheReapersMule

schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find the idea of Sasuke being pregnant and having babies completely wrong (at least I'm assuming he was he one pregnant, only got 2 chaps in) he's too much of a selfish bastard for that. I prefer to leave the baby having to Naruto. But I won't deny that you write pretty well. So keep it up.
person despairs
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke had babies with somebody else? Not with Naruto but with somebody else? Oh man :( Not good, not good at all *cries*

However, i TOTALLY LOVED the part where Sakura kicked the crap out of Sasuke and told him off....good for her!