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for Eggs and Toast

by KohakuShadow

schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very well written, and I love the way you put it together. Congrats on a job well done!
person pen_name
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eggs and toast, yum! NejiShika, yum! This is great and oh, so right in all places. Thank you for a wonderful read.
person Hestia
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah wonderful!!! An insecure Shika--wow, that's different and so adorable!!!
person Rikikato
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Give me your child ,Seriously xD I loved it ! Shika X Neji is one of my favorite pairings and I gotta say You made a Masterpiece in my eyes here. It was pretty cute with the whole its you baby xD andd The eegs and toast part made me chuckle =D

Take Care and Keep Writting Shika Godness woman!
person llyoung
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story - thank you so much for writing it. I really loved the line “Because it's always been you. That's all there is to it,” - that was really sweet.
person drivven
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOH Sooo Happy! That was wonderful!
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Rather adorable, actually. Extremely well written, even though you don't see these two together often, and that offers a bit of a shock. Lovely, and well done.
person charmpit
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My favorite pairing. You can't go wrong with this one! It is unusual to see Neji play the dominant role in this pairing; I'm accustomed to reading about Shikamaru claiming Neji, rather than the other way around. This is good, very good. Now have Shika-kun make Neji some eggs and toast.
person PrplGrl
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice once again!
Love your excellent work! Keep it up!
person lo
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I love what you did with these characters and built the story and the relationship. Nicely done!!