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for A Leaf in the Wind Country

by Figaliz

schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY someone who understands the greatness that is SasuGaaSasu. *sighs* I love this story and I'm glad to see you updating it. *does a little gig* I hope to see more, I will be following you. Also I'm glad to see that another person understands that Sasuke is somewhat sweet on the inside. (Well... in the manga right now I'm not so sure anymore) He is kind of emo though. But in the aminamted series he continually only takes what lives he has to. THe giving his actual name away... I thought it was obvious as to why he would. I mean if Kadu is as powerful and all seeing then he would have already heard about Sasuke and thus it would have been counter perductive to lie.

I also would like to say I enjoy how you play Gaara. I find him true to form. *claps* So far all the characters seem true to form, and I like how Gaara and Sasuke tease one another. *giggles* I was laughing a whole bunch last night while I caught up on what was going on. Great plot, great telling of it, and great portraynce of the characters. Oh and love that you didn't have them all over eachother the second chapter in, I can't stand it when characters just see eachother, barely know eachother and then they're like a pair of bunnies. Bravo and hats of to you for character developement. XDDD

I happily, albeit impatiently, await your next update.
person Crowe
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just thought I'd tell you how much I'm enjoying your portrayal of Sasuke in this story. It's entirely original, and quite effective at that. There are three or so personas that I've noticed writers tend to conform to when working with him, but your take on him is just... for lack of a better word, beautiful.
You have reminded me why Sasuke is/was my first and greatest love. xD
That aside, wonderful story. I (impatiently) await the day it updates. :D
person dkf
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, good so far. *Reads*.
person dkf
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaw. I can't help but feel bad for Naruto. Sakura was impressive, and I like your take on Sand.
person dkf
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kitties X3
person dkf
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"There were only two rules to the sparring: try not to destroy the landscape, and try not to kill each other. " Oh I want to use that.

Is my spamtastic!commenting bugging you XB?
person dkf
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh. For a minute I thought you were going to talk about Jiraiya. I was all "wtf O.o;?" 'till I read it. Yay friendshippy ness.

...i have mental images of fishmongering now. so your fault.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shin's very interesting. I love how complicated his character is.

Also, I never really thought of Kakashi's: What's under the mask? Just another mask
in such a way before (as not a joke) and it makes me a bit sad. Though it's very cool as well.

And you update so quickly! *loves* Two chapters since I've last checked. Lovin' it. Keep it up!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Love it. Especially your theory about Itachi and why he killed the clan. I really hope you're right.

Loved the chapter. The ending was adorable *huggles Gaara and Sasuke*. Can't wait for the next chapter; keep it up!
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. This just keeps getting more and more interesting. Shin has a very unique peronality- he seems as if he'd be easy to trust, though we know that he's the big baddy. I wonder how his time with Sasuke will go...

I always find fighting scenes challenging, though other authors always mangage to make it look easy. XD