rate_review Reviews

Hey there! You know, I really really liked this story, and was wondering when you'd post a new chapter? I know it's hard to overcome a writer's block (I'm trying my best) and I thought maybe a few reviews will help you out. Can't really say it worked for me though... (I was writing just fine without any kind of reviews, then I managed to get a good chapter finished, people liked it, reviewed it, and BAM! writer's block hits me again). I hope that doesn't happen to you.

But never mind that! Keep up the good work, I'm dying to know what happens between Kiba and Hinata! Please update soon and I promise I'll review your next chapter!

Hey! That was reeeally nice. I actually found it MORE interesting when I realized the fic was set in an AU.
And besides, I love the Kiba-Hina pairing. As for requests... I'd like to read something between... Lee and Tenten. It shouldn't be too hard, right? That's another of my favorite pairings (Truth to be told, I already wrote a Lee-Ten fic, but I'm not sure it came out too well... lack of feedback T.T)

Hmm… I have to say, I was initially excited when I saw a KibaHina fic (those things are as rare as diamonds) And the concept, albeit rather creepy, was fitting and intriguing. However, I must admit that Kiba's character was, well, not in character. He seemed way to proper and starched; I realize that was the mold he was SUPPOSED to fit, but remember we're talking about KIBA here, and he pretty much does whatever the crap he wants. I don't know. The dialogue was also a little strange with them constantly saying each other's names instead of "you." Hmm… Other than that, I think this has great potential to be an awesome fic, it just needs a little cleaning up =)

I have never read a story so well how can i put this um so
sexual in all my year of reading manga or anime or whatever keep it up sexcii muah peace

p.s. your lips r cute

Loved it! Normally I dont do the AU thing (too many high school ones bleh) and that is totally a personal preferance thing, but I liked this a great deal. I enjoy the idea of Hinata, shy, quiet Hinata, indulging in secret perviness. It adds to her humanity, I think. Continue, please!

that was such a great chapter! More KibaHina please! <3

I think I get where this is going......

just hope you label the pairings...because well I don't want to be reading hinaxkiba and bam its sassak x.x;;;;

.......i actually want to see gaianko >_>;;;;;

or anything with Lee XD

bah don't mind me it's late

keep up the good work

nice work. update soon and could you make a naruto sakura kiba threesome or sakura chouji story were chouji uses his familie's secret jutsu to do sakura or please do both of my request.

Sweet!!! she is back??? is she or is this a chicky Tease??? omg its a fucken tease isn't it??? you better not tease me this is good omg so fucken good so hot and wet and moist... i want more i want more yesterday... Keep it up and please keep this up its awsome and glad to see this couple i love Kiba Yummy in his own right and you sure make his so fucken sexy... Go Kiba babe!!!

Huggles

WOOT! Go Kiba-kun! So erotically beautiful. Poor Hinata. She's got what she needs right in front of her and she still cant see him. Like a certain blonde we all know. LOL Blind as a bat! Very well written.