rate_review Reviews

what an informative chapter. i wonder if itachi is the one who cursed sasuke or if all of the uchihas are cursed. i can't wait til the next chapter.

just keep updating

Love this story. Unfortunately I can't say much more than that as my brain seems to have gone to sleep without my body. But please keep updating. Maybe I'll have a cognitive review for you then.

Please update soon!

Nooo! Now Naruto's going to leave poor Iruka!! Oh the pain!

-Damp *sniffles*

Really wonderful.

I really really like what you have so far, you have a few mistakes, but all in all I'd say your doing a pretty good job. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next chapter:)

OH MY GOSH! I felt so terrible when I read about the whole 'Haku lives in a box and sells himself' *Jaw still on the floor* I just felt so BAD about it! And then when Naruto opened his big mouth and got totally bitch-slapped by Iruka -gasp- !!!! SO. SHOCKED.

-Damp *Jaw still on the floor, please do update! Dispite put-downs from other people!*

I really liked that! I can't wait for chapter three, please update soon! I LOVE the plot! I'm so intrigued and I want to read more! I feel like Sasuke and Naruto are about to have a huge relationship shift, such a cliffy!!! The imagery in this chap was awesome and I loved the visual in that old orange room. Naruto's growing anxiety was almost tangible and his outburt at Oro-sensei was so satisfying! Btw, I think Kang made valid points but he/she is an asshole. They can save their preaching and ranting for his or her eighteen cats but you didn't deserve that lashing. I like your style and the variation in your sentence structure and your diverse vocabulary but I'll agree the pouch part and globs needed revision. Take mean words with a grain of salt but I guess also take the point.

(and Kang, grow up. Great insight, wonderfully helpful, and yet full of shit. Don't rant to some girl like she OWES you her story. "Anyway, seeing that my constructive criticism only resulted in you doing MORE of exactly what I didn’t like-" yeah she didn't write it so YOU would like it, okay?)

You can call me your faithful reader now, but update! ^_^

I want to know if I should read this story or the one in FFNet? Just curious, cause I like it a lot... nyah... >.> I dont mind the style... or the words... or whatever... it's your call to write things just the way you want to... *shrugs* Just...*marches to the other one to leave a rewiew you can actually reply to* So you can tell me if you plan to make any changes to the chapters as you update.