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for Cheesing My Way Into Your Heart

by MoveThemHands

schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
baaaahahahaha OMG i havent started reading yet but i just HAD to stop in to check this out because i loved the title so much XDDD lmao definatly excited to read this pairing! ^^
person qwerty
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, crazy story. I love it a lot!
update!
person FireonIce
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you appreciated the comment. My friends tell me I need to be more upfront about things like this since I'm usually so misleading through my vocabulary.

ANYHOO, I quite like it. Sounds like Sui's kinda date and from the "I don't do this often" line he gives, make it seem like there's a whole other layer of mystery to him, which is exciting ^^ I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I think the only thing that could make this story any better is if it had Neji in it. Don't mind me, I'm not asking you to put him in the story but I AM a die hard Neji fan and I think he should being everything so the comment comes up a lot. Think nothing of it.

There's more to this date?! What could possibly top skydiving onto a ship that doubles as a scuba base? I can only assume that Sasuke is the "friends in high places" he was talking about? OH the suspense it killing me <3
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this fic! this pairing is sooooo rare, but its one of my personal
favorites! Please update soon! I also like the Juugo sasuke pairing too!
Keep up the incredibly good work!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally missed that second chapter coming out so got a two-fer this time. YAY! You're so cute! Please don't cry! I didn't think it was over the top at all. (and I'd tell you 'cause overkill is a peeve of mine) It'd be different if you were trying to be serious and dramatic, or if you'd gone into more detail on Suigetsu's background or lifestyle that wouldn't support something like this. But as it it was, hey, anything was possible. With a lighthearted story like this, it works out great.

So all it really left me thinking was "damn! what a freakin' AWESOME date! I wish someone would take 'me' on a date like that!" (Maybe I should take out a personal ad about it: 'Fun lovin' chick seeks temporary companion. Not for a relationship. Just one awesome date.' ^^) And Naruto's reaction was priceless! HAAha! CIA! How much would I NOT have jumped to that conclusion?! (uncontrollable giggles)

I'm seriously liking this nervous Suigetsu. And shy Naruto too. :P I love how they act all bold and 'comically suave' to cover their insecurity. SO CUTE!! I can hardly wait for more! Fabulous work Baby!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter! But all the talking before the story and review replies after kind tricks the reader that the chapter is longer! Oh well, ill take what I can get. :) Thank you for updating!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was soo awsome! I'd love to go jump out of a plane on my first date!
And JuugoXSasuke was not a pair i would have ever come up with. But you would definitly be able to pull it off. Ur a great writer! Thanks for the fic and update soon!
Thank You!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! You made me blush so hard from the praise. I didn't do anything, twas all you.

I love it... only Sui would take Naruto sky diving then diving. Well at least he'll get along well with all the little fishes. :D And I'm very happy to see you keeping up with the pick up lines, I wuld be saddened tohave them suddenly dropoff because they are a big part of the reason why I love this story. University is going good... ONE MORE ESSAY! Then I'm done... well... plus exams. Then I can get back to working on our collab :D I miss the high seas and I want to get to some piraty loving.

Le Gasp.You and Sato talk about me? :P No wonder I sneezed. (Myth that you sneeze when someone talks about you behind your back- althoguh doesn't have to be a 'bad' talk behind back) Now I'm just rambling... anyways. I love it, and I hope I can continue to make you write with a magical power... because I like seeing more of your work. :D
person getayaoilover
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see that this story had been updated. I'm glad to see that suigetsu is still using this cheesy lines. I can't wait for your next update so please don't forget about this story again, it's one of my faves!

(^_^)
person FireonIce
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna be honest, I disn't even like Sui as a character much until I read this. I'm impressed, I actually like this pairing. I hope you update soon because you're the only one who's doing this pairing any proper justice. I've read one or two of your other stories and I'm a big fan of your stuff, keep up the awesome work ^__^

SO many fic writers get Sasuke's personality all wrong but you got him just right in this one, especially the door slam XD Priceless.