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for Cheesing My Way Into Your Heart

by MoveThemHands

schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pfft. *Doesn't know what you were worrying about* Twas perfect. You've got to love those ackward first phone conversations... Although I have to say I don't usually pee during them... But I have been know to tease with the, "I just got out of the shower," line.

P.s. I adore shouting at other people while having a phone conversation with another. It always makes for interesting banter. He's lucky Sasuke didn't pick up another household phone and say somethign along the lines of "Sui hasn't gotten laid in over a year..." Because I've never done that to someone... >>
person Word_Slave
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I really did like this one!! And I have read a Juugo Sasuke one, I'll have to see if I can dig it up. It wasn't too long ago. I'll see what I can do! And this was a really great filler chapter!!! I looooved the way you wrote the caracters. Slave
person getayaoilover
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the update! I loved the chapter, especially how suigetsu kept wanting to call naruto but at the same time wouldn't. That was really cute, well I'm looking forward to your next update!
person a kitsunes light
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more!! eheh I've never seen a fic with this pairing seriusly and I LOVE IT!!!
cant wait!!!!
person Rosebud
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, after reading the review response you have me blushing. Hehe, I’m glad that you like my work. And this story... fuck, it’s just awesome! XD I thought it was adorable how Sui was in a bad mood, and how he kept second guessing himself on calling. Score one point for the Uchiha on pushing the button for him. Hehe. ^^

And there’s going to be Juugo/Sasuke too…!? That’s another underappreciated pairing. You don’t know how happy it makes me to hear that these two are going to be getting some action! XD Keep up the awesome work, and if it wasn’t obvious; I loved this chapter!
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH no update fo me? *pouts* How awful pray tell why?? Well I hope that you update more with this one. I can only wonder whats gonna happen on their 'date' hehehehe Wow a dobe and a jackass what a combination lol. Sugoi!
person mls
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy this chapter!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
person berkie88
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have NEVER seen this pairing before! so you better continue because I want to see more of it :-P
I can't believe I actually hadn't heard some of those lines! Cheesy lines rock! :-P well, as long as you don't take them too seriously...
do Naruto and Sasuke know each other here or not? it would be interesting if they ever met (again) through Suigetsu...
hope you'll continue soon!
person Rosebud
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I love you!!! I love this story!
Please, please please update this soon! There aren't enough SuiNaru fic's out there and this one was awesome honey! Thank you for letting me know about it. *hugs*
Reading this fic really made my day! ^^
person Ana
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is my first SuiNaru fic and I'm hooked already. This is really good. Sometimes I'm not a big fan of AU because they aren't always good. I think that this is great so far and can't wait until you update. Until next time. ^.~
~Ana~