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for Cheesing My Way Into Your Heart

by MoveThemHands

schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was a unique pairing, that's I decided to read it and I'm glad I did. This a very cute and funny story. I kind of wish you would continue it just to see the look on Sasuke's face when 'Mr. Player' comes home with a hot and smexy blond one night. ;P
Either way it was great.
=)
person Word_Slave
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, this was funny. Have you seen Ouran Highschool Host Club? It takes cheesy pick up lines to a whole new level and it's actually quite good.
Slave
oh yeah, and more soon please
person getayaoilover
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i loved it! this is the first time i've read this pairing and I'm in oove with it already. Please continue to write this story!
person mls
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't Wait to read More Of This Story!!!!!!!
person ANON
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Cuteeeee I love it. UPDATE SOON!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was 'fabulously' well written!! Two enthusiastic thumbs up! BRAVO!! YAY!! ENCORE! (whistles) It left me wondering if Sasuke knows Naruto in this au and what kind of a reactionhe might have. Like would he be surprised or would he just scoff and say that 2 idiots are meant for each other. Anyway I hope you do continue it because it's really good. ^.^
person animelover
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a way to start a day ... laughing myself hysterical! Darn, and I though Sui was gonna get really, really lucky. Hmmm, maybe another chapter coming? sigh, would I get that lucky? ;-)
person Bonanza
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGawd! Finally! A SuiNaru fic! This is definitely a watch-love favorite! XD

And yes! A one-shot won't do, lovie!
So, I expect you to add another shot. A continuation!

Anyways, thanks for making the fic. It was really lovely. ^^
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was like the very first SuiNaru I have seen or at least paid enough attention to read. And I have to honestly say I wanna see whats up your sleeve with this. I will keep an eye out for the update. Ja! Oh and that other one Bastards Hands, looking forward to that too!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One word. Yes. Actually is more like four because I'm laughing it, but either way. I love the set up. Its like a perfect giant excuse for pick-up lines. And Naruto was in charater all the way. Heck if it was me I'd even laugh at the lines, but be endeared in a way. Love it! And faithfully awaiting your updates as always. :D