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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you wrapped this baby up nicely. I hope that Sasuke finds what will make him happy and Naruto and Gaara find a way to make their unlikely relationship work. A sequel would be nice but I'm not going to push my luck.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this, it was so realistic. I mean it could really happen that way ya know, it wasnt the usual "oh Ive really been in love with you all along and didnt know it" scenerio. I love how you portrayed the plot and the characters. Keep up the good work and update soon.
P.S.
Hows about a little lemon for us pervs...? ...Please...
P.S.
Hows about a little lemon for us pervs...? ...Please...
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! I was close to tears with Naruto and Gaara's final talk. And the scene between Naruto and Sasuke was just perfect.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T_T I'm soo sad it's over! *sniffles* I definately liked the realism of the ending. Perhaps there will be a sequal? *hopeful eyes*lol This was my ultimate favorite Naru/Gaa fic!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, you ended it here????? Come on, you need to have an epilogue of mind blowing sex!!! Please!!! The characters were awsome and it was a wonderful story, but please.... one more
Slave
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, I loved this. Great job.
Can't wait until your next story. ^^
Can't wait until your next story. ^^
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sometimes, a "happy ending" isn't the best solution, so you came up with a "real ending". we can't always know who we love even after we ponder and think about it. naru understands himself and his feelings now, and he's willing to explore. that's why i think your ending was just the bomb!
thank you for this story!
thank you for this story!
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The playoffs between the present and the past are artfully done. This is an excellent story you have here and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. ^^
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG This is fricken incredible. Please hurry and update a.s.a.p. Im dying for the next chapter
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For this being a difficult thing to write, you sure are owning it! I love the details and metaphors you use throughout this story; my favorite being the reference between gaara's skin and hair " saffron on milk" hehe I can't wait for the next chapter!^_^