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by CrazyToffee

schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I wonder why I never found this story before, cause I'm a GaaNaruGaa fan... (can't write it worth crap, but still a fan. ^_^)

This is a very touching and good story. I look forward to the next update. Ja ne.
person Yaoi_Lover_Kimi
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>w< The more I read your stories the more I fall in love with them!! Please keep posting more!
person digiditz
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I have mixed feelings, of course, because I don't like the way Sasuke has shut himself off from his emotions completely. (I know, he always been like that) Of course, anyone who does something that dumb shouldn't be surprised when the person they love move on to someone else. Anyway, I love the Gaara/Naruto pairing and I think you've written it very well.
person animelover
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa, that was INTENSE! man, i had to catch my breath when i got to the end. it would be so beautiful if naru went to konoha, fully realized "his" sasu was gone, and then go smex up gaara for keeps. but hey, that just my humble opinion. lOL!

dang sweet update!
person LenaKitsune
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how so long of a chapter could have felt so short, I felt like I was just getting started when the chapter ended and I know I'll be checking the site periodically till I see the next chapter. It all just feels real, like something like this would actually happen to the characters.
person Word_Slave
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a wonderful feeling for the characters and the way Naruto reacted to being touched for the first time was so.... well.. touching. Please update soon
Slave
person Word_Slave
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This second part was really good! I can't wait for the next, but I have no idea how you're going to finish it up in only two more chapters!!
Slave
person animelover
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so awesome! wow! that interchange when gaara makes naruto confront his feelings was some of the best writing i've seen on this site. keep up the good work!
person beautifullove348
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My God! You gave me a heart attack with this chapter!

So much drama I loved it! Obviously, this was another fantastic chapter :) The emotions of the characters were just perfect. I actually felt them. I loved it.

I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gaara's changed more than he realizes if he can pick up the emotional undertones of Naruto's confusion, where Naru can't even do so. I love this story!