rate_review Reviews

(I review as I read.)
To your A/N: What do you mean you can’t be thinking about that in math?! I do it all the time! XD
Cute start. . . . (*snicker*) Naruto’s legs and Sasuke’s personal space issue. XD . . . . It’s called ADD, Sasuke. Something you don’t seem to have. . . . Love the sudden switch in mood! ^^ . . . . And again! =D . . . . (*giggle*) “Bad, bad, bad.” XD . . . . Huh. I wonder what’s making Sasuke so bold . . . oh. . . . “He knew enough about his body to tell that,” well, duh! How could he not know he’s turned on?? õ_o . . . . Love how receptive Sasuke is and how uncertain Naruto is. . . . Mmm, slow and sensual. . . . Oh mannn (*blush*) . . . . Nice ending. Short and sweet.
Very cute.

that was fucking hot!

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiice! Only a oneshot? Damn.....I'll give you cookies if you reconsider.

Perfect!

That was smexy indeed. The title was QUITE appropriate. ^_^ Nice job.

i wont forgive you if you dont continue... nyah... that's all I have to say... oh, that and Great job! It was very sexy!

That was really good... *sticks blushing face into freezer* Yeah... good. :)

Second last sentance seems a bit rushed - maybe a one line of contemplaiton from Naruto first. BUT this story is awesome, and I'm only picking on the one thing I thought could use a little improvement. It's brilliant how it is, so feel free to ignore me on this. I loved reading it, well written excellent pacing. Hope to read more of your works in the future.

wow that was very hot! Can't wait to read more.
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