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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
rofl!!! omg that's just hilarious!! i can't wait to see how creative this gets as well as how creative Naruto gets to turning ppl down.
person ifXY
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awrite now dats what i call a pik up line!! u go Itachi-san! ^^ fufufu
i loved it too grt work! XD btw hw abt a sasuke one too?? later on wards maybe?
and u can perhaps write abt da pik up line Naruto was most impressed by.

iffuts: I shalth dominate the world with my yaoi craziness! >.<
Itachi: -.-; yea rite!
person dustin
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha...did you by any chance mean sasuke being in his MIND...? poor itachi...
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
one word. AWESOME!!!
person Lanie12777
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was great, I laughed my butt off! Can't wait for the next one, update soon please!!^_^
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fun
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. kinda funny. not a lot of chapter to criticize your spelling or grammar which was fine, anyway. make your chapters longer when you write(be descriptive and use prettiful words ^_^) keep writing and i'll keep reading.
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was too cute! The only thing I heard cuter was when this lil boy asked a lil girl if he could have her number and she said 439-Not this time LOL. Update soon I wanna read more cheesy lines
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I'm such a freaking sap for cheesy pick up lines so I'm pretty such I'm going to adore every update you have!

*laughs* Poor Itachi, get that genis mind aworkin and think up better lines then that! I believe in you!!

Good job ^_^ Looking forward to more!
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so looking forward to more... of course, in the end, to get Naruto, you just need to be Sasuke Uchiha and say "You. Mine. Now." Then you carry your little fox home and... well, things get interesting. Best pick up line ever.
Until the next