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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, all the other shika temari stories are really lacking. You are our last hope and I know there are a lot of us out there. Write another or continue (or ill bite your head off) :P jk. anyways, you had a bumpy first chapter so e-mail me if you need an editor. ( a veteran beta here)
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats a fun story
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was hilarious. Great story, lots of fun and a very nice sex scene though the use of their chakra and their respective jutsu was really funny. I do hope you`ll give us a few more chapters of this story, if not then I hope to see a story of yours ASAP, though please update
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice ending
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was so funny
temari was so evil and i loved the "Double fuck jutsu." Hahah this was a good piece. The lemon was exciting and didn't bore me, and it had the good amount of yummy humor and juiceyness to it
part of me wants to see a sequel with Temari actually getting preggers O_o and both of them still fucking around!
temari was so evil and i loved the "Double fuck jutsu." Hahah this was a good piece. The lemon was exciting and didn't bore me, and it had the good amount of yummy humor and juiceyness to it
part of me wants to see a sequel with Temari actually getting preggers O_o and both of them still fucking around!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! Temari and Shika for life!!!!! I LOVE how sexy Temari is! She's totally my idol, lol, j/k, but I kid not how much I love her character! Great job! Shika-Kun is so cute, always having to over-analyze every single thing, lol. Keep up the good work!!!
~Sho-Chan~
~Sho-Chan~
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start; i want to see some revenge! XD
something tells me it's going to be a war and that Lee/Gaara/sakura/etc. might be involved in it
something tells me it's going to be a war and that Lee/Gaara/sakura/etc. might be involved in it
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot. I enjoyed reading it.'
Rox
Rox
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was okay. I will admit though, the story does have potential. I reserve my final judgement until the next chapter (if there will be one) Please update a new chapter!