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for Take Me Home

by CianisDeRolionus

schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! update soon please!!!^-^
person xhellxgirl
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story and cant wait for the update um is there a way i can alert this or something so i know when you update
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shift nervisely in chair* That was great, I love the story. But what the hell happen to Sasuke, did Naruto run over him or something?!?!? oh god the saspints is killing me! I just know Sasuke parents or his brother will reconise Naruto and all hells going to brick lose. *shiver, scwram* Please update as soon as you can. I need to know?!?!?! Thanks for the great chappter. ^___^
person beautifullove348
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very nice.

I absolutely love your descriptions. It makes everything feel more lavish and expensive :) I love your writing style and I can just feel the chemistry between Naruto and Sasuke.

Please update soon I can't wait for them to meet the family ;P
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... a mystery! Naruto knew Sasuke... strange, intriguing... I can't wait for more. I like the way you deplict 'relaxed' Sasuke and I am so looking forward to meeting the family. Will they remember Naruto, I wonder?
person charmpit
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Next stop chapter 3, ne?

I'll be waiting.
person Dragon7
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo this story is very fascinating! I just kept reading and saying I wanted more!! Uh oh, what's going to be happening when Sasuke and Naruto wake up from their nap?? I can see them cuddling together and they don't even realize it! Hope the family approves of Naruto!!
person Jamie
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, what is the mysterious past. ^.^ I like this alot!!
person BennyPeace
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha your summary doesn't do the story justice. I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of your writing and the plot is far more interesting than I thought it would be. Good job!