rate_review Reviews

I'm not questioning your decision to go in this direction with the plot. After all, only you know what will happen in the future of the story. I will say that I'm INCREDIBLY relieved Kakashi didn't do anything with Tsurenai. I can't stand it when Kakashi 'cheats' on Sakura. My only problem with this chapter is that Sakura can't remember the drugs she was injected with. Hopefully, she remembers soon and things will get smoothed over with Kakashi. Angst during a story I can deal with, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending!

So, is Tsurenai a kunoichi? Partner for the yellow-eyed man? Is Dajaku involved, under some sort of influence or just too greedy to care? I'm guessing influence since Yellow Eyes said he himself sent for a kunoichi. Ugh, so many questions! And aren't Sasuke and Naruto on the way? Can't remember at the moment. Can't wait for the next installment.

What can I say? I loved that chapter.. I get so sick of reading fluffy crap.. This put the rest of the story into perspective and I like it.. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Please update soon.

i think the turn of events was okay, its to be expected considering the flow of the story since the begining,
a little angst is alright with me just as long as the ening is not bad,
i still believe in happy endings if u know wut i mean!LOL

Very nice. I lost the story for a while and couldn't find it, i came back and 3 more updates had been done. Very well written, love the direction the plot is going in. Keep them coming, pun intended.

Okay...first off, thank you for the warning at the beginning of the chapter. It definitely helped my prepare for what was coming, and what did come was very twisted and intense. The 'happy ending' part of me really, really wanted Sakura to find some way out of the situation, but I know in reality that just doesn't happen. I could honestly feel my heart sinking when he took her and completely break when it was all over. But I still can't wait for the next chapter and hope that Kakashi will find something wrong with Sakura before the end of the night.

Are you kidding me? This chapter fit really well into the story, in fact it makes more sense this way. I don't think I would be as interested in what happens next if this chapter was fluffy. I am impatiently waiting for the next chapter. Simply beautiful this story is.

It is horribly dark, but concidering the rest of the story I could kind of see it coming. I almost cried when Kakashi left the bathroom, I so desperately wanted him to find out the truth and be able to save her. I'm terrified for the next chapter, but I would never stop reading, even the darkness is beautiful.

I had to read this last one twice. I am not happy that sakura had to sleep with him, but we all knew this from the begining of this story. HOPEFULLY YOU MAKE KAKASHI HER ROCK AFTER THIS. I love this story and if you lose any fans from this story then they weren't really fans. GOOD JOB!!! Hope to read the next chap SOON!!!!

I ... well after the set up at the end of the last chapter, I knew that 19 wasn't going to be pleasant. But, I ejoyed the chapter. It was angsty and a bit dark and I understand that sometimes there is a need for events to turn that way. And I had a bad feeling about Tsurenai from the very beginning!!! Gah! That dirty little... Anyway, I am on edge for the next chapter already, especially after Kakashi's realization and I'm curious as to what Sakura will do next and how the club owner is tied in to all of this.
Great work ^_^

To be completely honest this chapter was frustrating but not entirely unexpected. A twist like this only builds the story's appeal and tension. Having Kakashi and Sakura's budding relationship thrown for a loop like this makes you get even more into the story. Im not going to say i loved it because that was definitely cruel but I'm sure its all a part of your masterful plan.
until next time! Happy writing.