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Wow, after every chapter I think to myself, "This story can't possibly get any better!" And yet time and time again you prove me wrong, damn!Any chance you'd read my story and give me a few pointers? ^_^v

This chapter ended all too soon.

I loved every minute!

How desperately I'm waiting for this chapter! It's sooooo good! your story lighten my day!! The plot, the chareactres, the build-ups! All perfect! So please continue quickly! Thank you!!!

well it was an interesting update, I liked the fact that they are finally seeing thier feelings as love and not lust

the only part i didnt like about this update was how he was treating her while they were having sex. He looked like an animal and kakashi was very OC in this chapter, it was HOT, definitely..but not very kakashi like. I liked the rough hardcore sex in the bathroom, but the hallway sex was eh... I didnt like it honestly. Dont take it personal please, I really dont mean anything by this, just because one person is complaining about how kakashi was means nothing compared to hundreds of other reviews.

Other than that your story is fucking awesome and i cant wait for the next update when she has to fuck yellow eyes :D

This chapter was very well done. The characters are advancing from a purely sexual relatioship (HOT by the way) to something more they both know is coming despite their efforts. On top of that their feelings arent in the open and yellow shows up! WHAT? lol this is great. I'm excited to read the next installment. Great Job.

omg, so happy! thanks for the update! loved it!

The story is great and one of the best well written ones that I have ever read. So keep up the great work with the details and development of the plot and characters. So please finish your paper becuase this supense is killing me now with the Sakura and the yellowed eyed man now. Is she going to be taken like the others or not be able to sleep with him or able to sleep with him and get the information or what. Then there is how Kakishi is going to respond to her trying to obtain the information. So great job again and can't wait to read more.

lol... I think you're officially on a Lemon high! Niiiice...

good chapter, interesting events. i look forward to the next chapter ^^

Oh my god...I am so entranced by your writing. The latest chapter has put me in such a state as I have not felt...ever. I am going to go bother my girlfriend now! I will write a real review later. Thank you!