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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fuckkkkkkk this was SUCH a hot chapter. wow. hot.hot.hot. please update soon! the build up and sex scenes are mindblowing!
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful and is one of my all time favorites. The story has a good solid plot and storyline and you stick to it well. The characters are well developed and seem to grow as the story moves forward. But most importantly the details of the story are great nad that is the key I think to it. Anyways great job again and can't wait to read more soon then later I hope please. Thanks for the great story.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, J-Pop! Loving the story all the way through! Curious though, how long you planning on making this story? Nothing wrong with making it long. Just curious. Anyhow, would love it if you could read and review my story "Torima's Vessel." Needing some experienced reader/writer criticism. Appreciate it. Keep up the good work!
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOw, yeah. I am so ready for chapter 17 now. please hurry.
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. If there are any grammatical errors or composition issues, I was WAY too wrapped up in the story to notice. Great job on drawing us readers into the action. Whew! It is hot in here.
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the next chapter has to come out sooner than soon. i'm addicted and i want to know how team 7 will react to the new sakura
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hooray! can't wait for the next update. ;)
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful!!!!
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I have not been able to stop reading this.. I was finished in like 3 hours.. I am hooked and can't wait to see more..
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 16 is amazing, i dont think i've seen a whole chapter dedicated to such an explicitly written lemon, well executed man