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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person tylendel
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeeeeeee*

Kakashi is TEH awesome. I LOVE you for writing him so well!

More soon! Please! Need fix! *twitch*
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ive enjoyed your series immensely so far ^^, the content, quality and chapter length are all good ^^
person Jo
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited for the upcoming chapters. The smut in this last chapter was perfect, beautiful and moving. And it would be so awesome for team seven to get to the club and see skura...i mean hana stripping. Could you imagine kakashi rushing over to calm naruto down, hehe.
person Crystal
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was good, it honestly made me blush though with all the detail *Blushes* ...*cough* But yeah I was really into this part of the story it just draws you in and you can see it happening. Of course it didnt help that I was in sacura's body at the time of reading but yeah *blushes* was good. Oh! And that would be funny as hell if she did wined up letting the rest of team kakashi go because I want to see the looks on naruto's and sasuke's faces when they see sakura strip Lmao omg X.x *squeals in delight* Something tells me the impossible is going to happen and this story is going to get EVEN better! ^^
person E1224
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read it.

I read it FOUR TIMES.

I CAN'T UNREAD IT.

And good lord it was so wonderful, one of the best and most inventive, inspiring lemons I have ever read. Of course, I expected nothing less from you.

The emotion was absoluetly beautiful. Yes, yes it was lust but it was bordering on conflicting emotions and love there for a little bit, my heart actually started sinking because I was reminded of the feeling of my first time too (and how special it was, to be told how beautiful you are, ooooh that bit hit home for me.). The detail was beautiful, the characters perfect and down to an utter art work, everything Kakashi said had my spine readjusting, and everything Sakura said was sooooooooo /cute/!!!

Beautiful, hot, raunchy BUT a tastefully done lemon. So thankyou, and congradulations!

And now I'm gonna go read it again.

Man, do I need a shower right now.

After I read it again, of course.

LOL.
person Steph
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That.... was totaly worth the wait. Damn I love your stuff keep it up.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this was GREAT!
now i'm superexcited for the next chapter
dont make us wait too long =D
person Geda
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot, and amazing, and oh lordy. *fans self* Marvelous. I need to...uh...bye.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I waited patiently and it was soooo worth it! Keep up the good work!! Awesome!!!
person Dragonangelx003~
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*holds bloody tissue under nose*
after soooooo very much built up, that was by far the best KakaSaku sex scene Ive ever read. I loved "Bending the Rules" and "The Window" but this one is working hard to become my favorite Kakashi x Sakura fanfic of all time. Bravo.

As a fellow writer i know you crave constructive criticism, and i can honestly say that otherwise blue-balling poor Kakashi for so very many chapters i have absolutely nothing to complain about. your description of the scenery, smells, sights, touch, sounds, and even taste are of the highest quality. Perhaps you can even give the Naruto creators a tip or two. (especially what had better F***ing not take place in chapter 425 in the manga!)

I eagerly await the next chapter to your story, hot sake in hand. -^_^-