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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person Sam
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohmigodohmigodohmigodohmigodohmigodohmigodohmigod!!!!!!!! Its was PERFECT!!!! This was so totally worth the wait, the entire story built up to this and made it all the sweeter, you did an absolutely AMAZING job it was so beautifully written, honestly. The way you portray these characters together is superb they are in absolute balance with one another, the romance and fire boils over in all aspects of their relationship, its almost overwhelming and keeps me grinning throughout. I really hope that the rest of the team is sent as back up, ever since they first arrived and Sakura danced I was wondering if this may happen. I cant wait to see how you convey there absolute stunnedness at seeing what Sakura has evolved into. I feel a little bad for Naruto, I love him to death, but you have turned me into a Kakashi/Sakura fan too. And even though Im sometimes a Sasuke fan, I just cant wait to read what this new, smack in the face, Sakura will do to him. Bravo, encore! I love it, and I think I love you too! :D
person puppydog
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your a gineus and I love you! Keep going and the lemon was great!
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. That was definately worth the wait. I love how they both thought they were going to die at one point. I love how Kakashi was such a considerate and caring lover. I love all the attention he lavished on her, and practically worshipped her body. That's just the kind of lover I imagined Kakashi to be. It just made me love him that much more. The scene you wrote for us was so incredibly detailed, you managed to describe every detail, and not use any of the awful cliques you find in smut. In short, that was fucking hot. I have been lurking until now, sorry about that, I should have given credit where credit is due. This story is absolutely wonderful, I stumbled across it, when it was 12 or 13 chapters long, read it in one go, and have been eagerly waiting for updates. So, thank you, for sharing this wonderful story with us, and I can't wait for the next installment. Finally my obsessive checking paid off. ^.^ XXOO
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW.. is it hot in here or was it just the INCREDIBLE sex scene you just wrote. Def the scene. WOW. thats all i can say. Its writing like that, that makes me fall even more in love with Kakashi... *drool* lol Keep it up!!
person kira
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again. AMAZING.

=] You are truly a gifted writer.

XOXO

Kira
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh FREAKIN' JESUS!!!!
They did it??? *u*
You don't know how happy and excited I was reading this new chappy!
My god ,hottest scene EVER!
And my fav line : “Just tell me what you want, baby. I’ll do anything for you.”
DAYUM...
You have delivered the heat and it was H-O-T XD
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God I love it! I can't wait to see the remainder of team seven's reaction to Sakura. Oh that shall be great to read. i can't wait! Keep up the great job.
person anon
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLYYYY CRAPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =o

Thats all I can say about this chapter

This chapter was FUCKING MIND BLOWING!!! wow!! that had to be the BEST sex scene i heve ever seen between kakashi and sakura, so much detail and everything from both parts of the scene, oh my fucking god, im speechless right now, i dont know what else to say!!!

YOU ROCK!! you really are truly an awesome writer, I love it!! wow, just wow

I cant wait till the next chapter, but this chapter was honestly worth the wait definitely

wow..
person Nadenes1229
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*inhales long drag off ciggarette* Mind blowing.
person Ryan47
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you were still writing and I am glad you are because it's one of my favorites. The writing is quality with good detail and follows it storyline well. So keep up the great work and please updatre sooner this time thanks.