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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person Just_Lovely
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the picture is at Deviantart.com under the name Rouge-Trinity.
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Halloween is creeping closer! I'm excited for the hinted update. You have me itching with anticipation. :)
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Surely you can't leave us hanging like that! I'm in such shock, that was outstanding, so much has happened in that chapter. Your stories are absolutely amazing and I can't stop reading (: Thank you x
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This isn't even one of my fandoms and I still yelled "Arrrrrrrrrgh!" at the ending (or lack thereof) to chapter 15. I know you're busy, but an update would be *highly* appreciated, and, looking at the reviews, by a good number of people other than myself.

If it's half as interesting as your stories, at this rate you'll get me watching the bloody show...
person LaLa
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wahhh this chapter was really good!
i'm excited for the next chapter
will they find Yellow? what will happen to Sakura?
ohh i cant wait!
please update soon!
person Titavi
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! The tension between Kakashi and Sakura is fantastic! His emotional response is great and exactly how I would picture him reacting. Personally I picture Sakura being more mature and already to have had sex by the time she is 18 but they way you are writing her is just as great. There are a few editing errors but nothing that really takes away from the story.

Please write more and soon!

-Titavi
person E1224
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH

MAI

You have done it again you mad thing you!!! Another excellent chapter, loving the interaction between Pakkun and Kakashi, I laughed, I cringed, I laughed some more...

Hmmm, I have a few ieas to where you are going with this, one being the fact that Tsurenai was possibly the only one who slept with Yellow and wasn't kidnapped, and the fact that Miyabi was one of the more beautiful dancers on her hate list so she may have something to o with this. However, it could go any way at this point and I just adore the fact that I can't fully predict your intentions for this. Hell I can't even say if Sakura and Kakashi are gonna end up doing it in the next chapter. I can allways go either way.

The kiss was so beautiful, truly a lovely piece of writing that left me feeling all fuzzy by the end, because it was like suddenly there was more to it than just lust. Obviously they do care about each other, but there is more underlying feelings there that was assentuated by that little moment, and it was utterly wonderful. Thanks sooooooo much for that.

Eagerly awaiting your next update with an open mind. Ooooooh, I really hope Miyabi is okay!!!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil ! DX
Ugh we don't even get to see his reply to it or anything!Oh your good...very good....
I am so hooked on this story that I can't get away though!
I wonder whats gonna happen???Oh well
person Darkside The Fallen Angel
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MURDER!!! I SAY MURDER!!!
person Darkside The Fallen Angel
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just kidding.^^ i have read most of your stories i love them! ^^