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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person red_katty
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is honestly amazing. This is the first Kaksaku story I've read and I'm glad it was this one! I read like the whole thing in 2 days it was that good, I couldn't stop! Anyways, keep updating I want to know whats happens next, it's so intense!
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! How dare you leave your loyal readers just hanging like that. You are a twisted unfair person! Ahh, just kidding, ya it kinda sucks but that was one hell of a chapter. You covered a lot of stuff and I feel like even though their situation can't get any worse you've managed to move the story forward a lot with a single chapter. I can not describe to you how happy I was to see that you had updated btw. I just finished a huge project for a class and this was the absolute perfect indulgence after all that brain wracking work. I check in at least once a week for updates and Im so glad to finally have one. Thanks!
person ShadouRoku08
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I Hate You!!!!! This is torture!!!!...ending chapter 15 like this... I swear I have never loved someone and hated them so much at the same time. Argh! No more teasing!
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHHHHGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!

*brain anurism*

*death*

Ok, I can understand that you are busy and I can respect that. Really. I'm in college so I too know what its like to not have all the time in the world, but come on! That's just cruel! Its like blowing your boyfriend, only to slip a cock ring on at the last minute, fuck him until your satisfied, then walk out of the room. That's it.

If I was going to have to deal with a cliffhanger, I would have rather dealed with the "Miyabi's missing" one than the "I want you to sleep with me" one! I'm patient! I could have waited until you were ready to post chapters 15 and 16 together!

Man, what a cock-block. (Well...maybe not a cock-block for me, being a girl, but it still fits)

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Really.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Dont stop there! PLEAAASSEE I wanna see what happens. With how wonderful the rest of this story has been, I know its gonna be awesome!
person puppydog
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love you!!!!!!!! Finally theres going to be some action! I hope. There will be right?
person LadyApollonia
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*takes deep breaths to calm down* I know anticipation makes things better, but OMG they better do it in the next chapter! Kakashi has absolutely no reason to turn her down that Sakura would believe. I love this fic so much. I squealed when I saw it had updated.
I super hope that Sakura manages to show Sasuke and Naruto how sexy she can be when they get back. They deserve to be shown how wrong they were in their view of her. Stupid jerks. And the shock would kill them if Kakashi & Sakura became a couple. It would be awesome.
PLEASE update soon!
person Crystal
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that was awesome, i wish the next chapter would be out sooner though the suspence is enough to kill someone, ugh ium tired now cause i stayed up all night reading this lol, I <3 it, thanks for writing it and updating so quickly and for the explanations on why some chapters are going to be late i love that. ^^ Thank you
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!
lol.
They need to get it on already.
I love your story!
person Kaysan
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(pout and sigh) Well, I can't say I'm too upset since your build-ups always lead to something wonderful. But dang it! I was all giddy and 'Yay!' when she first texted him knowing where that was going. And there was all this chapter left so I was like, 'Surely this is it!'. And then...sadness. It's such a tease cause you know it's coming, you just don't know when. Loved it as always and I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Smooches!

Ooh, afterthought. They have no idea what 'Yellow' will try, so just how much is Kakashi going to have to teach her? (dreamy sigh) Ah, the possibilites.