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aaaaww man I just finished reading this entire story on y phone (trust me it took a while) thi is a great fic. the sex sounds fantastic the plot was flawless and the invisible love triangle between sasuke sakura and kakashi is so awesome, please please update I really cant wait to see how it ends

i don't usually write reviews for fanfics, but i must say this is the one of the greatest and probably the most memorable fics i've read...and i've been reading fics for about 9 years now. The lapdance scene was pure gold....never stop writing. xoxo

very very great story. I love it so much I read it during all my classes!!! The plot is full proof and the love scenes are epic!!! I just wish I didn't have to wait for an update, but I do understand that you have a life so I'm willing to wait as long as it takes

Pleaseee update! I can't wait for the last chapter, i need to know what happens!

I must say, that it is a very good fanfic that you have writting during these 2 years... i have been reading it since you posted... chapter 6 if im not mistaken, good narrative and erotic too, yet it is not bulglar or bad taste, not pornografic either, wich i belive all ways of erotic works should be, plot with porn i mean... great story, a little out of chara but i guess it should be do to the way the plot goes, it would be a interesting thing to add like a cover for the book... like Sakura showing her exposed sexy back arms around her chest, a concearn look in the eyes as she looks back at something, taking almost all the cover, and Kakashi in the lower right corner in his cover disguise, the girls in a worried expresion on the left lower corner and Kudou in the back smiling wickedly holding a kunai in his teeth and his yellow eyes shining in the darkness... it would be a kick ass book cover... maybe if you ask around for artwork? deviantart maybe? i dunno, i belive it would rock.

Gah! This is so good...but the last chapter is still missing! Amazingly well crafted story line. Even the dark part, though controversial, served its purpose. Well done! :D

i usually wait till i read all the chapter you got before i review.,
but damn., chapter 16., that was the hottest sex scene i've ever read in a fanfiction.,
i'm really glad you took your time with how you write the story, every little details of it.,
awesome.,

Heyyy I've been following along in your story since a couple of days ago and I just hit chapter 10... OMG. You are such an amazing fanfiction author. This story has all I've been looking for. The sexual tension between Kakashi and Sakura is so realistic and it's got me hooked! Just wanted to write that to say thanks for sharing such an awesome story! =DDD

This story is AMAZING!!! I love it! Great writing and awsome plot! please please please PLEASE finish it! You story is amazing and it's been the only thing I've been reading for the past couple of days and if you don't finish it soon I may go crazy with wondering whats going to happen!!! Great job with the story, it's the best one I've read yet!!

Chap 25 was great... looking forward to the finale.