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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is literally the best fanfiction I've ever read.
I can't say how much I anticipate every coming chapter, I really can't. It's like something I literally can't not read, every time another chapter comes out, I have to read it. Then, unfortunately, it's over with, and I have to anticipate the next coming chapter.
Thanks so much to you and your beta for making this wonderful fanfiction work - Kakashi is surely sensual in many more ways than one ;O And I didn't like Sakura all tha tmuch until now. You bring out their personalities so well, whilst mixing it with your own new characters. I praise you! -Hands cookies- :D.
Thanks again.
-Jenelle.
I can't say how much I anticipate every coming chapter, I really can't. It's like something I literally can't not read, every time another chapter comes out, I have to read it. Then, unfortunately, it's over with, and I have to anticipate the next coming chapter.
Thanks so much to you and your beta for making this wonderful fanfiction work - Kakashi is surely sensual in many more ways than one ;O And I didn't like Sakura all tha tmuch until now. You bring out their personalities so well, whilst mixing it with your own new characters. I praise you! -Hands cookies- :D.
Thanks again.
-Jenelle.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is HOT
and it has a good plot!
keep it up!
please update soon!
and it has a good plot!
keep it up!
please update soon!
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg you are awesome, you have no idea the images you have instilled into my mind, and the way you have literally perplexed me about the mystery of this fic. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this so beautifully, its like a work of art that you have finely crafted for my eyes and mind. Poor Miyabi, I hope she is ok... >.< I really really am looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope school doesnt get too much in the way that you cant complete a few chapters every now and again for your loyal readers. Im sure everyone will agree with me, we love you and we love the amazing writing you produce, thank you so much.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yowza!
What a chapter!LOVE IT!For a second there I thought Kakashi WAS about climb on stage and grab her and lock her up in a room with her lol.
WOW,so is it 'Yellow' or what?Can't wait to see what happens next!
Poor girl :( She was a great charater too!
What a chapter!LOVE IT!For a second there I thought Kakashi WAS about climb on stage and grab her and lock her up in a room with her lol.
WOW,so is it 'Yellow' or what?Can't wait to see what happens next!
Poor girl :( She was a great charater too!
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh no thats horrible.......that was an awesome chapter please update soon
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG ~ I LOVE YOU!! Thank You for another chapter in this good story! Very happy to see another update so soon, it is going to be hard to wait, but worth it I know!
OK, that mysterious guy, I knew he was Shinobi!! *clapping* And here is what else I am thinking: He DID NOT have sex with that girl, he used Jitsu on her like Sakura does on her targets (to mark her for pick-up), and he is not harming these girls, but saving them and taking them somewhere safe...
I WANT YELLOW EYES TO BE A GOOD GUY!! :P :P
Oh, and I secretly think the "Queen Bee" Dancer is the one arranging this, and getting the girls help (again, this is what I hope anyway).
Doesn't really matter as I am enjoying the HELL out of this story, and looking forward to more reads, THANKS!!
(Hope you don't mind my theories!)
PS ~ Kakashi and Sakura need to have sex soon, or all of us are going to die from frustation!! Just Kidding! *HUGS!*
OK, that mysterious guy, I knew he was Shinobi!! *clapping* And here is what else I am thinking: He DID NOT have sex with that girl, he used Jitsu on her like Sakura does on her targets (to mark her for pick-up), and he is not harming these girls, but saving them and taking them somewhere safe...
I WANT YELLOW EYES TO BE A GOOD GUY!! :P :P
Oh, and I secretly think the "Queen Bee" Dancer is the one arranging this, and getting the girls help (again, this is what I hope anyway).
Doesn't really matter as I am enjoying the HELL out of this story, and looking forward to more reads, THANKS!!
(Hope you don't mind my theories!)
PS ~ Kakashi and Sakura need to have sex soon, or all of us are going to die from frustation!! Just Kidding! *HUGS!*
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! The plot is picking up! Exciting!
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The way you write this story is the same Sakura dances... such a tease...! :-p
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!!!
I love your stuff.
Keep it up babe!
xoxo
Kira
I love your stuff.
Keep it up babe!
xoxo
Kira
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story and I did squeal when I saw the update