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OMG, what the heck happened. WOW, everything just burst into action. Damn I cant wait til the next chapter.

Awww... No smut... Your such a tease xD The pl0t keeps getting better and better. TEASE!!!

OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter even if it's around Christmas! When you do add to this and any of your other fics, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

Love the story so far and the writing is some of the best I have read. Can't wait to read more and see what happens next. Great job write soon please.

F**K! That was an amazing chapter, and dammit that's a really good cliff hanger too...Its time for some answers. Youve been leading us around by our noses, completely blind folded, for far too long missy. Im tired of being teased. What is going on I want to know, I really hope you manage to post more then once between now and Christmas. Im wondering if this means that they will be calling in back-up now that it seems that they are in over their heads and have even let something like this happen right under their noses? hhmmmm...that would make for some interesting and lol moments. Well anyway I love the story as always and I cant wait for the next post. ;)

Just one before Christmas?! Are you serious? What will I do until then? (Pout) I seriously get giddy and squeal like an idiot when I see this has been updated. Sort of embarrassing, actually. Anyway, this chapter freakin' rocked! It may not have had any KakaSaku interaction (sadly), but damn if it didn't satisfy! So, if yellow eyes is a shinobi and Miyabi seemed out of sorts and then seems to have left on her own, I'm guessing it's a jutsu he's using to lure them away. Should be harder for our pair to stop him if he isn't forcibly taking the girls. Ah, the suspense! Can't wait to see an update! (Hopefully before Christmas, though I understand school can take all of a person's free time, so no pressure). Hugs & Kisses!

LOVING this series, the writing style is detailed yet i have never found a lack of pace! The characters are realistic yet resemble the characters from the show identically.
Well done! Keep up the great work darling!

x.o
Bella M

First of all, let me tell you how much I love this fic. BEYOND love for this fic. However, I could honestly strangle someone for Sakura having to leave because she couldn't keep her clone in place. I really could. For the love of all things Naruto, PLEASE update extremely soon! If they don't have sex soon, I'm going to scream.

You EVIL woman! Building up to all that tension, and then, nothing. GAH.

Let me make one thing very clear. While I'm not usually a fan of Naruto, the few dozends of episodes I watched with my younger brother piquied my interest, and let me say that this is, by far, the single best piece of Fanfiction I have ever read. Naruto fanfiction or not, is IS, quote, the best piece of writing I have ever read.

Your writing, while flowery, detailed and descriptive, moves at a nice even pace and is easy to follow, with albeit incredibly rare mistakes that go entirely un-noticed unless, like me, you read over it four of five times.

I read it through at one point after happening across it by chance. Your characters all have their own personalities and are well rounded, imaginative with their own quirks and flaws, like they all contribute to the story and make it more worthwhile to read. In between the utterly delicious sex scenes is the swelling, wrought emotion of the dancers who reflect on their past experiences, and it really makes the reader feel the pain, the desperation.

Daijaku needs particular praise, sometimes I don't quite know if I should love or hate him. While he did "save" the girls from poverty and illness, at the same time its as though they are prisoners, but he has his moments of politeness even if it is fear of Sakura.

I absolutely ADORE your spot on portrayl of Kakashi. As I said, I have only seen a few episodes, but his character I happened to find very interesting. While we can honestly feel his utter need for Sakura develop, we can also see why, and it goes far past the reason of "OMG YOU HOT LET'S SEX" and into Kakashi's own experiences, mindset, and personality. While he is an awful pervert and ladies man, he just can't seem to get his head around how much he would love to have Sakura if just for one night. And every time he gets close, boom, something happens to stop it, and the frustration is cringe-worthy.

As or Sakura, beautiful, BEAUTIFUL. Even through her transition into a sexual perdator, she keeps her compassionate heart, she doesn't become cold and hateful, which was something I expected from the beginning. I love how it happened so gradually over time as she found her sexuality and revelled in the euphoric feelings while Kakashi looked on, and the tension between the two is near an unbearable point where I found myself saddened that there was no chapter 14.

The tension had my hear pounding and turned my hands clammy against my dammed laptop. The love scenes, while cut short by the plot, were steamy and breathtaking, and thankyou, THANKYOU for describing Kakashi's face before they got to the actual sex. Sigh, I love those tempting little details.

An incredible piece, and I highly anticipate your next update. Don't keep us waiting now, I have already attached myself to this like a lampree eel!

Damnit I was hoping she was gonna dance this chapter!DX
You know how to leave a person hanging!
BUT I do LOVE the chapter :}
It was so steamy but then it just turned sad at the end.*sigh* Both of them are so confused :-/
Can't wait til next time!