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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person A.J.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so very happy you updated! I love that some really great foreplay action happened again between our favorite couple but I think that the end of this chapter may have been cut off mid sentence. It drops off with Kakashi on the bed after Sakura leaves. Check it out on the site when you get a moment. Anyways, the chapter was great as always and I look forward to the next one before school begins!
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
U TEASE!!!! I hate you, but I love you!! God dammit! You're turning me into a masochist, I love your torture, it hurts so good *whimpers*. Kakashi you're a smart man now get a friggen clue already. What I love about your story is not only are we getting some wonderful dirty romance but also a grand mystery that Im dying to solve.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg!!!!! pure torture. it was wonderful! you have such a gift for playing out scenes with just the right timing. the anticipation was killing me. thank you so much for updating! i look forward to your next chapter!
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this chapter was particularly good - I really like the unsure, but erotic, build up of the massages. They captured that nervous excitement of initial sexual exploration perfectly.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
arghhh!!! You just love to torture us all, don't you? Yes, yes, don't deny it. I know you do, it's there in your eyes, er or words, yeah thats it. Anyway, always a pleasure to read. For a moment I thought I was gonna need a cigarette after this chapter (if I smoked that is), but then you left us all hangin. Sniff, sniff! Now I need a stiff drink, poor Sakura she must be ready to buy toys. And lets not speak of our resident silver haired sex god, I think he might go insane before this story is through. Oh, your cruel mistress! Well, can't wait for the next chapter and the resulting nosebleed from Kakashi when he see's our pink temptress in the buff! Whoo, hoo! Keep up the good work and hurry back with more goodies!
person Dora
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know if any of this was real you'd have two people very upset with you right now. LOL Hopefully they won't have to wait to long to ah... finish the job *snicker*
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are going to Fic-Hell! How could leave us like this???? WOW!!!!!
Extremely hot!!!!! I love Kakashi!!!! When is the next update? Hurry before you go back to school!!!
PLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
person Pickles
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story so much as well as your others! Update soon and please no more teasing we want smex!!!!!!!!
person Kiddykat005
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, as always. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out! :-P
person Toshar
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of all the things I could say, there is just one really fitting... *Intense*...