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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Kakashi and Sakure definetly have the hotts for each other! <33333
More chapters soon, pweety please?
More chapters soon, pweety please?
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, this story is PERFECT. I LOVE how you balance everything so wonderfully. It's like you take every single detail into consideration, and I absolutely love it. THANK YOU.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this this story alot because the writing is great and that's what makes a story good. The detail and everything is suberp and I can't wait to read more.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Long, too! You're as good at describing fighting sequences as you are at strip scenes.
Only quibble: it's probably too late now to add in, but why haven't Sakura and Kakashi thought to check the background of the dancers? I don't imagine they'd find much, but Tsurenai has been Suspect No. 1 for a few chapters because her jealousy is an obvious motive. I'd feel more forward movement in the mission if they were creeping up behind her a little more by now.
On the other hand, your pacing on the relationship between Sakura and Kakashi is perfect. Thank you for writing.
Only quibble: it's probably too late now to add in, but why haven't Sakura and Kakashi thought to check the background of the dancers? I don't imagine they'd find much, but Tsurenai has been Suspect No. 1 for a few chapters because her jealousy is an obvious motive. I'd feel more forward movement in the mission if they were creeping up behind her a little more by now.
On the other hand, your pacing on the relationship between Sakura and Kakashi is perfect. Thank you for writing.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating! I always get so excited when a new chapter comes out and I think this last chapter was fantastic. I really like how slowing the relationship is developing. It makes it more realistic and plausible. Keep up the good work!
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update please~! I love this story and really want to see you continue this.
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story but it's been a while for a update so please continue with the great work.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Kakashi/Sakura fic I've ever read. Please keep up the wonderful writing!!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed "Stripped Bare". It has what I look for in any story. GREAT attention to detail and plot line. I hope to see more chapters in the future. Take your time and get them done the way you want them
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, J-pop Princess. I started this comment over and over again, not knowing exactly how to begin and with what. On one hand I wanted to write something a little bit longer than 'Yey, that's fantastic, update quicker', from the other I felt a little stupid, because I didn't (and in fact I still don't) know if you read this stuff here and it seemed like most of the people satisfy themselves with a short comments. I saw you encourage comments so here I go. In fact I'd have written anyway...
I'm not native in english therefore please don't mind the whole bunch of spelling mistakes and the awkward language I use.
I found myself watching Naruto in the middle of june examinations, 10-14 days ago, I was bored to death from studying. Two days later I was already addicted and was drooling over Kakashi O_O. Honestly I didn't expect I'd like such a long anime and especially one that targets kids more or less. But it seems I was wrong ecpecially since I finished the 220 + 63 episodes in a week or so.
My excitement with the anime and the obsession over Kakashi brought me here and I found myself reading various fanfics with him as a protagonist. I honestly didn't know he's usually paired with Sakura. At first I thought it's a strange couple, after all there's nothing going on between them in the series, hardly any interaction. Besides I thought almost everyone hated her character (that goes for my friends here). Actually I started to like her very much after she began to train under Tsunade in the series. After reading 4-5 fanfics about Kakashi x Sakura I started liking them immensely as a couple.
I was really excited and impressed about this fanfic, it's different from the others and more in my liking. It has an actual plot that moves the story in a direction which is a good thing. Well it's not a Noble prize candidate either but it doesn't need to be ;). It gives a great number of opportunities for provocative scenes and happenings with the characters which the main purpose I think. Most of the fics I read were just plain and static, like pictures with no beginning and no end. There were no plot at all, just good old graphic smut scenes which are ok if you look for that stuff only, I suppose. Personally I prefer some kind of story, even a cliched one, to introduce the reader slowly and gently to a certain setting, to create and swallow him into a vivid atmosphere and make him feel comfortable, make him care about the characters and the plot. For the most part of the women readers, I think, the way itself to the sensual scenes, the provocative little details, the teasing along the way, are the things that really matter and make an impression. Which leads me to another thing (or rather two things) I wanted to compliment you for - the style and the pacing. I just love all the details in the scenes, the thoughts of the characters from a different perspective and presented several times. Also the fact that the story doesn't rush (it's quite teasing, you know :P) or become boring (as long as there is even a single moment of interaction between our two lovely characters, which is a little more intense than the one(s) in the previous chapter) it's a fantastic rhythm. It's just so to my taste. Keep the good work on details and rhythm(pacing) of the story, it's really wonderful.
I read the last chapter of the fic 5 days ago and I check the site every day for a new one. I don't know how long it takes you to write a chapter (I hope it's not a whole month every time :P, 'cause we're going crazy then), but I hope the next one is coming out soon :). Just hope you're not out of inspiration or too busy.
This comment turned out a long one and probably awfully boring, for that I'm truly sorry. I hope you read it some day :D. Wish you tons of inspiration and free time. :P
I'm not native in english therefore please don't mind the whole bunch of spelling mistakes and the awkward language I use.
I found myself watching Naruto in the middle of june examinations, 10-14 days ago, I was bored to death from studying. Two days later I was already addicted and was drooling over Kakashi O_O. Honestly I didn't expect I'd like such a long anime and especially one that targets kids more or less. But it seems I was wrong ecpecially since I finished the 220 + 63 episodes in a week or so.
My excitement with the anime and the obsession over Kakashi brought me here and I found myself reading various fanfics with him as a protagonist. I honestly didn't know he's usually paired with Sakura. At first I thought it's a strange couple, after all there's nothing going on between them in the series, hardly any interaction. Besides I thought almost everyone hated her character (that goes for my friends here). Actually I started to like her very much after she began to train under Tsunade in the series. After reading 4-5 fanfics about Kakashi x Sakura I started liking them immensely as a couple.
I was really excited and impressed about this fanfic, it's different from the others and more in my liking. It has an actual plot that moves the story in a direction which is a good thing. Well it's not a Noble prize candidate either but it doesn't need to be ;). It gives a great number of opportunities for provocative scenes and happenings with the characters which the main purpose I think. Most of the fics I read were just plain and static, like pictures with no beginning and no end. There were no plot at all, just good old graphic smut scenes which are ok if you look for that stuff only, I suppose. Personally I prefer some kind of story, even a cliched one, to introduce the reader slowly and gently to a certain setting, to create and swallow him into a vivid atmosphere and make him feel comfortable, make him care about the characters and the plot. For the most part of the women readers, I think, the way itself to the sensual scenes, the provocative little details, the teasing along the way, are the things that really matter and make an impression. Which leads me to another thing (or rather two things) I wanted to compliment you for - the style and the pacing. I just love all the details in the scenes, the thoughts of the characters from a different perspective and presented several times. Also the fact that the story doesn't rush (it's quite teasing, you know :P) or become boring (as long as there is even a single moment of interaction between our two lovely characters, which is a little more intense than the one(s) in the previous chapter) it's a fantastic rhythm. It's just so to my taste. Keep the good work on details and rhythm(pacing) of the story, it's really wonderful.
I read the last chapter of the fic 5 days ago and I check the site every day for a new one. I don't know how long it takes you to write a chapter (I hope it's not a whole month every time :P, 'cause we're going crazy then), but I hope the next one is coming out soon :). Just hope you're not out of inspiration or too busy.
This comment turned out a long one and probably awfully boring, for that I'm truly sorry. I hope you read it some day :D. Wish you tons of inspiration and free time. :P