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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! The angst, the angst! Guh! Need....more!

*coughs* Anyway, thank you SO much for updating this! I know that life can get very hectic and that writing doesn't take first priority but i appreciate your desire to finish this. But...don't keep us waiting too long... ;o)

ch 25
person Bleh
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
horrah! an update! I was very excited to find this, and am very excited for the last chapter. Good luck with your life endeavors, I (VERY) eagerly await the next chapter :)
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I for one don't mind having waited almost 2 years for this fic to evolve into what it has. I wouldn't sweat the graduating from college thing. Trust me...it will come to you. Good luck and let us know when the big day takes place. In the meantime...please don't forget about us, your faithful readers. I like the way you are using Sasuke to "try" and mess up things between Kakashi and Sakura. But it better be Kakashi and Sakura that end up together...okay?

j/K...the fic was awesome to read and I would re-read it again.

wickedone43
person moor
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good luck with your last term of school -- I hope you find a job that makes you happy! :D

On to the review -- I was sure you were going to have Kakashi walk in on Sasuke trying to kiss Sakura, at the beginning! You tease! ;)

Loved the tension, and a part of me is actually kind of hoping for the awkward hilarity that will result if Naruto *does* go rummaging around in Sakura's bag on the trip home. Or Kakashi. Or Kakashi stealing the outfits and refusing to give them back until Sakura re-enacts some Icha Icha in them. XD

Thank you for working so hard to give us a new chapter -- good luck in school, I hope you get to enjoy some of your last term!
person rotture
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your summary is inaccurate, as sakura holds absolutely no sexual appeal, and one cannot explore what does not exist.
person Nicole
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love the story so far, you neeb to update soon! What does he see!? Is it naruto in a bikini! Haha I bet it is, :)
person Falynn
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story for a while, and now rereading it for the umpteenth time and discovering new chapters, I actually realize it isn't yet finished! xD
You've got an excellent story-line, your plot is uncannily in-depth, and your characters are very well-written. You capture the canons perfectly, and have made a seamless blend between their anime-realm and this fanfiction.
Your story is captivating, and I can't wait to see it continued.

Good luck, and please remember to have fun while you write this! :)
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It has been a while since I last read this story. I love this new chapter. I especially like Sai and his cluelessness. Poor guy. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a great day!
person Kelly
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just read Stripped Bare and I love the story. It really is great. I was helping a friend of mine plan a wedding this summer, I have internet on my cell phone and every time the bride was stressing me out, I would get my phone out and read your story for a bit to help with the stress she put me through. She was a bit of a bridezilla. Well anyway, I love the story. I think it is great, very creative can't wait until it's finished. No rush though. For a story to be good, you should never rush through it, it takes time. I think what you have done is amazing. You did great at the details to help people picture everything the way you picture it. I love the characters. Keep up the great work and never stop writing. You have a real talent for it. Thank you for this wonderful story.
person Meh
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I just finished the 24 chapter, and I must say I really enjoyed it :) I very much look forward to the completion of this story. I especially hope they end up together in your story!!!! And then many more stories to follow, so we can read about their future ;)